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After MC dies, he gets to travel to other worlds but he doesn't any wishes, power, or help. Watch or in this case read as he tries to stands at the top of the food chain while trying to get girls.
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I like the story so far, so I would appreciate it if you can keep up the updates. It's interesting how instead of a power he dies and becomes hollow, I'm anticipating more releases as others are. Also Hallibel Unohana Isana Rangiku Yoruichi Rukia Best girls. Just my opinion kEk.
Man, just went the story was getting good. The updates just stopped. I thought the character was gonna change his personality because he didn't care about anybody at the beginning, then I thought it was gonna be like the other novels where it starts with a selfish character who only fights for his own benefit whether it be for good or evil, then the character completely becomes morally good, where I would feel I wasted my time, i thought that was gonna happen, when he started hanging out with Urahara and the others, but I was wrong, he was just doing it to get chicks. Hope this story gets continued cause it was getting good. Could do with less of those Date chapters though.
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Its good but is has basically been dropped so it isn't worth reading. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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i love this novel as it a pretty rare concept to be found on this site as ive only seen it twice before and im glad somebody is finally doing it
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Very interesting bleach fanfic going the route of a hollow I'm interested to see where this going and if it's a harem or not overall so far good read and I'm enjoying an immensely
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If you continue to write this, you will improve enough to make it a good fanfiction. Do your BEST, I will be there to read it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lots of potential, the story has a nice pace. Good job. 🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️ 🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️🙆♀️
This is a fan-fiction of worlds travels without any cheat. The MC is just a normal human that is selfish. There a lot of fan-fiction with a cheat and it gets boring fast so I got the idea to write this. You know, let the MC do some work instead of just getting instantly powerful without doing anything. Tell me what you think!