摘要
Years ago, in the country of Sei'O, a plague spread and turned half of their population to stone. The children of those infected were born with skin abandoned of all color. Completely grey, they were known as Plague Children.
Though they possessed no ability to spread the plague, they were heavily mistreated, discriminated against, ostracized, and often times killed at their younger ages.
The story follows the young Plague Child Ora, as he gains one of the strongest relics the world would ever come to see. With it, everything changes with relative ease. What fate awaits this world that heavily mistreated Ora?
In this world of magic, relics, and ancient arts, no one could be certain.
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It is really really confusing. There is no transition so you have no idea what is going on. The pacing way to slow. It takes 15 chapters for one small thing to happen. I'm angry because the plot was really good but was wasted and ruined. BUT. Please keep in mind that this is my personal opinion and very many others might love this story. I loved it in the beginning as well and I thought it started well, it just got worse and worse. So I recommend reading the first couple of chapters to decide for yourself if you like it. I didn't like it myself but who knows, you might. Go ahead and find out. Author, please don't let me discourage you and if you like writing keep doing it. In conclusion. I didn't like it. I got frustrated as it went on and eventually gave up becuase I couldn't handle it. But I would recommend you to read the first couple of chapters, however, if you dislike slow pacing and bad transitions and simply don't want to read if you aren't going to finish then don't read it.
I am loving the story. This story takes a tried and true concept of hero summoning and game boxes and manages to still be fresh and entertaining. i was a little confused at first with the perspective shifting to different MC’s or viewpoints. If the story had ended on one of those when I first started reading it would have been horrible. Luckily I started reading after 18 chapters were done and I can see how the viewpoint shift is going to enhance and make the story better. My only complaint as ever when I finally find a great story is that I want more immediately. That being said I would rather the author take their time and continue to put out a high quality product than face speed and a decline in quality. Keep up the great work and ignore any of those haters that only bring negativity to any situation.
Literally one of the most well-crafted stories I've read on here. The characters all contain such depth to them. Though I can't say I particularly liked the first three chapters, I'm glad I continued through the story. The first Arc's plot was exceedingly impressive. I'd definitely recommend reading- you won't be able to put it down.
Always a sucker for a well rounded magic system the story uses the standard "items with powers" theme to great effect. Some nice world building. It even has downsides to the use of said magic items. There are a couple characters that are wonderfully deep with only four chapters, and rather a lot of the background mentions obviously will get more time as the plot unfolds. absolutly worth following.
I just finished this book up to the 51st chapter. It’s so detailed and intricatly complexe. I hope the author is doing ok because it hasn’t been updated in so long... please be ok...