/ Anime & Comics / Picking up girls in a dungeon?
摘要
Sora accidentally arrived in the world of 'Is it wrong to try to pick up girls in a dungeon?' (Danmachi), ended up joining a family in an absurd way gaining fame and unexpectedly becoming a hero.
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Honestly, the story is decent but it feels flat like going through the motions. It lacks any emotional pull for me with a lackluster MC and hardly any interesting dialogue with other people. I usually only give novels 10 chapters but I gave this one 17, but again it lacks anything unique or interesting to make it stand out for the rest of the fanfics
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muy entretenido fanfic de danmachi el prota aunque es otaku no es inutil tiene buena personalidad y los poderes asta ahora no son salidos de las narises
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I'm giving it one star because this is a Chinese novel. Please, when translating, explain and include the original name.