/ Eastern / Phantom Dragon
摘要
Imprisoned for eternity, Wei Jian's crimes would not allow him an ounce of freedom. All of a sudden, a mysterious old man connected with Wei Jian's story, and Wei Jian was reincarnated again into the mortal world. Wei Jian must tide through the sudden change in events and cultivate back to his previous peerless status, whilst enjoying his youth again.
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Yo, I already love this story so much. It's not going too fast and not going too slow. And I love the fight scenes. I wish I would have found this later tho since I cant wait to read it, sadge only 17 chapters, imma put this on hold and wait till 100 chapters or more.
I see author is a man of culture since he be describing only thicc and sexy women in the novel so far. And the fights scene are cool I guess. I do say the update of one per is not so bad.
To be honest, there are not a lot of things about your world. The same goes for character design. It's just the occasional line about their shapes and faces. Not much to go with. The story pacing is average I'll say compared to other novels I've read.
The writing and grammar are alright, and it's digital so even better. And the guy on the cover looks hot AF! So I cant wait to see more from you. I really want my own character integrated, a cute girl with big mommy milkers!