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Connor, a young boy in his disappointing world, oblivious to the things around him...
But... he doesn't know the future that awaits him...
He doesn't know that there are secret organizations filled with spies that hold powers of the supernatural....
He doesn't know that the MSTO, a party full of spy mage organizations, wants to inflict their power and strike fear into the world...
He doesn't know the immense power that he holds...
He doesn't know the enemies he'll meet...
But he will soon, in Perk Mage.
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the story and the character design are impressive but the writing skill or looking at someone is writing like a story book not a novel so I would say just improve the writing skills
The novel is a good novel but needs some improvement The spacing in the novel and the expression of the MC needs some improvement
It's such a good and so much relatable start. The story's blend of magic, suspense, and personal growth also makes it an unforgettable read.
The story is good and the first few chapters were clear. The way the mc is made is good. The way you describe the situation is new and the slow burn pays off
This is a interesting novel, Great Flow, Character Development, and Pacing; the key signs of a great work. I like the concept of the story, and from what a read so far the worldbuilding seems to have a solid base. I'll definably comeback to read.
Now, I've just read the latest chapter of the book, and to what I would say out of everything I've seen, it's rather a ride. Now, the plot is rather unoriginal. What saves it, however, is the concept. The concept is rather odd but intriguing, and the action scenes and characters (in the later chapters) are very engaging. This is a fun book.
This is just a shameless review from me here. I believe this book is going to be really enjoyable for you. For me, the soon-coming 2nd volume is much better than the first. This first volume is meant to set the scene for the things going forward, so if you wanna join the ride me with me, I'd be eternally grateful.
Love the concept and the story's pretty cool. For the Characters I can say they were done well but unfortunately I don't think there is one that really gives a 'standout' feeling to me, which is fine as you don't get that with every story. Story is a nice concept but I do have to say in regards to the quality this is where I see a small thing here. At least for me. While I like the story, the style and grammar is also something that is just as important to consider. I believe this has style but I know that they can improve it as well as there are some Grammar issues ; however, I believe people will still enjoy the concept and the story you are crafting.
I think the concept is very intriguing, but the characters are a bit cliched. Otherwise I think this novel is very good. I'm excited to read more!
Love the concept and the story's pretty cool. It's a bit wordy and the writing could be sharper. I'm sure it'll get even better as it goes along. The main character could use a bit of a boost. Can't wait to see what happens next!
It's a good concept and start, though a bit wordy at times. The synopsis, though repetitive, does draw you in. The characters are a little clichéd, but that's par for the course of this genre and to be expected. I anticipate they will become more defined and mature over the course of the series.
Interesting plot with a lot urgent going on, the writing style was clear, and story was more interesting the more I read. Good job for author, keep it up!