/ Book&Literature / Percy Jackson: The Queen's Champion
摘要
Percy is betrayed by the person he trusted most. Not what you expect, you'll see. Lost, he vanished without a trace.
He returns a different man with a close relationship with the least likely goddess. No HOO...yet. What will happen when new threats rise. Will he fight?
^^^^^^^^^^
I do not own anything everything goes to its respective owner.
fanfic creator =Anaklusmos14
link=https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8948741/0/
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
He replaces OG Percy with a boring, indifferent, guarded version. The tragedy which was way too forced, can explain the change but the fact is, his old personality, and who he was is just way more interesting and entertaining. He is very close to fitting into the cliche norm MC you find on this app. he does show a smile here and there but he is a far cry of who he was. and no matter how much development percy goes thru he won't be who he was before the tragedy and thats a shame. Events in the story are very forced so far but its to create this scenario where he's now loved by the people who hated him most. rest of the story isn't bad but this is a watered down version of percy, taking away what made him special, and while seeing this version of percy might seem interesting, there are billion other fanfics with simular MCs, unlike OG Percy. Even Killed off his mom like every cliche origin story. lol Now he'll probably wife up all the maiden goddesses. lol alright im done. good luck.
Pretty sure this was posted by someone else, now the guy wasn't the author but he did give credit.