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Percy Jackson and the Hard-Working Mortal

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作者: NoHaremPlease

4.81 (19 評分)

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A guy dies, meets Chaos and gets reincarnated as a clear sighted mortal
English is not my main language, please bear with me

Writing test 2 (pjo, artemis love interest)

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NeetMc

I love the character type you are placing here. I cant wait to see which demi-god or even godess would the mc hook up with, i would also like to say that i hope to read more of this fanfic

3yr
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Qianye
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3yr
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Khan00

Im really excited so please dont drop this at least for a few hundred chapters 😂 and I feel like you can slow things down if only a little i feel like you are running throught the story a little fast unless you already plan to change or add to the story in ways that will help further the character development. it would also be interesting if you would spend more time writing about the fights or put in some more details who doesnt like some blood and violence😂😂 but over all thanks for such a good read and i hope you keep it up

3yr
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FoolishPanda_25

i like it, its connected to the original enough to make you feel the story and unique enough to make it different, new and thrilling to read. Currently chp 15ish.

3yr
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MegaMacho

This book is overall fine. But there are key things that just making reading this a pain. 1. Don't use (...) every single sentence. Nobody does that, and for a reason. Its ugly to look at, and gives a lethargic feeling for the experience. Use it very, very rarely, or none at all. 2. The character reactions, motivations, etc... could use some work. He is lackluster. You don't have to make him mighty, just interesting. The rest can follow this.

3yr
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Tidalfan

love it good plot good pacing and good of [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
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Catstodian

What more can be said, That has already been? I is a good story, the speed is good but could be slowed down at certain parts. Other than that, it’s one of the few good PJO’s out there. It is not one of those overpowered or “smart” Percy fanfics. I believe you perfectly recreated Percy’s personality like uncle Rick intended it to be. And the main character is balanced the way where it would not destroy plot on a whim. You truly are one in the countless thousands to do it right.

2yr
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Spicy_Lasangua

Love it. Really good so far... Hope to see more updates tho......................................................................................

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Farly02462343

it is Good you can make a likeable MC, and you have Mastered the way of cliffhanger,--------------------------------------------------------

3yr
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universe_creation

absolutely amazing!

3yr
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3yr
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MirkoSensei

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Doom_Night

good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

2yr
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Deonte_Adams

Is this dropped? I really enjoy it so far and can’t wait to read more if it’s not. One of the best Percy jackson fanfics I’ve read.

2yr
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LittleBoyDeath

Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue.

3yr
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AsuraBor

It's back baby let's go!!! Thanks for the update.

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GigaChad

great story and grammar, interesting and very funny😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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marcelll3214

I know you will drop but very good so far. Interested where this will go in the future, I will come back for sure if you write more chapters.

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