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*Bronze Prize Winner of WPC 282: Sci-fi!*
It all started when the first contact with intelligent life off human conquered space was established. The aliens had reacted in a much more violent manner than what humanity had suspected.
The first waves of alien invaders came like a swarm of locusts, attacking the human colonies on the peripheral planets of humanity. When they were finally taken care of, humanity was already pushed back to only Earth and Mars.
Humanity's greatest scientists studied the technologies of the fallen alien spaceships and other devices, and were able to make many more ground breaking innovations.
The most recent innovation came in the form of the Paladins.
The Paladins were highly advanced creations of science that had come about through a more radical experiment by one of humanity's leading scientists, Doctor Harvard Stewart.
Moses Magair is a young, but promising soldier that has caught the eyes of his superiors. He has been selected to be the latest Paladin that will protect humanity against the alien invaders.
Follow his journey through the ranks and through outer space as he takes the fight to the alien invaders!
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Wow, what a nice concept. Seriously, I was hooked by the prologue itself, and the 3rd chapter was the cream on top the cherry. You're doing a good job though. Writing quality is excellent, really. There's a lot of elements from Mech Touch here and I kinda like it, author, just try to add a bit of originality to it. As for the paladin project, it reminds me of avatar 2009, seriously, I'm hooked. I definitely recommend this.
Writing quality is spot on. Amazing 👌 The story development also looks good so far. The character seem to be dynamic, and although there are just few chapters, the work background seems to be rich and in-depth. I look forward to more. Keep up the good work, author! 👍
It's hard to make a judgment so early, but this story is setting my judgment in stone. The writing is great: much much better than the mediocrity one can find sometimes on this platform. While good writing instantly makes a story better and more enjoyable to read, the plot itself carries the reading to new heights. Sci-fi is a criminally underrated genre within the Webnovel website despite being one of the most imaginative and, well, speculative genres. Paladin-X follows up with that, and a story set within our very own solar system - a good segway into the world background. If I said the world background was bad, I'd be saying our own universe is badly written then, no? Now, onto the characters. I don't have a clear idea of the characters, nor has the short quantity of chapters given me enough content to decide whether I enjoy them or not. Overall, this is a book worth looking forward to and reading. Seriously, with how much mediocre content is pushed around nowadays, I'd say - treasure the true gems from amidst the pebbles, and give this book a read!!
The start is promising. The story begins when at a pivot point—the inception of Paladin Technology. I get the vibes of high sci-fi where technology would play a crucial role in tandem with the famous mecha fights. And we have a whole universe to explore. Depending on where the author wants to take it, it can be a crazy, crazy journey. Check it out!