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Life and Death go by the hand, in more than one way.
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寫檢討From reading all your fanfics i for a fact know that this piece is worth 5 stars. It's pretty rare to find a well written overlord fanfic so i'm quite happy to see where you're going with this!
I think this series had a lot of potential.. unfortunately the author did not do justice to it..it keeps going downhill I get it this is fanfic but still...i guess expected a lot from cornbringer sama
Plot- ⭐⭐⭐ Quality-⭐⭐ Update-⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character-⭐⭐⭐ Background Research-⭐⭐⭐⭐ _________ With recent multiple stories plans, Cornbringer's work quality has suffer as well as the plot lines has also become overly predictable... I fear the prime time of his most glorious work was done with the GoT fic... And these crumbles of smaller fic ideas and dabble are just essences of a writer trying to recapture a moment of his past's most glorious days. P.s: with all the stories advertising and impeach his recent most succesful business development in patreon, I fear for his health... Not really. (Is the greed for material wealth the reason that a great writer is losing his immaculate ideas and work quality? I wonder.)
Previously you've written good fanfics like, GOT, Avatar, and Percy Jackson and for some reason in your two new fanfics I feel something is missing, not that I hate it but I don't like it. It would be cool if you made a new fanfic like One Piece with a fallout game system or a pro gamer who was reborn in Sword art online, I can't wait for your next work (google translate)
Just one chapter and i love it already. The idea is just nice. I would have chosen nephilim, but its not my story. Writing style, grammar and as i know his update rate will be very good. Thanks for your work.
ayo, cornbringer! you know what? ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... corn is overrated!
Its Been 1 chapter and i’M already saying its a 10/10 Almighty cornbringer has done it again. Well im still 111 characters short so i’ll praise the almight cornbringer again.
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yeeeeh first review baby, and it's just that for now because only have one chapter, it's to early to tell if worth or not read it, but how the great reaven is the author of this fic probably gonna be another awesome
I wanted to first read a few reviews before starting the fic but then I saw it was from the Master of Corn 🌽 corn....corn....corn....bringer
Don't mind me, just finna put a 5 star review here because cornbringer (°~......................................................~°)(•.....○......•)
I've been wondering, how does it feel writing someone who is conventionally a psychopath now? I would think it fun but I'm not sure how others would view it.
Although i know he's not going to end this one, I will still enjoy it while lord cornbringer in on it. Also, I hope a one piece fanfiction is on the way...
I don't like MC, but your novels never cease to amaze me i didn't even know that i already read at least 2 of your novels 3 with this one now and i'm enjoying it.... You are a great FF writer... Can't wait for more chapter.... i think i'm going to install pat reon because of this FF. I love Overlord. You can call me Crow if you bring more corn.
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Great job by the author. The story is very well written with few errors (5*). World Background is also very accurate to the Overlord story, if a bit shallow (5*). While I have a few problems with the Main Character, the OC characters seemed very well done, even if they didn't get much screen time (overall, I give character design 4*)(Actually, I don't think one of his OC NPCs, the Terminator one, even got ANY screen time). Lastly, and the most problematic for me, is Story Development. The plot for this story is a bit...meh, I guess. It is very predictable, cliche, and honestly a little boring. MC has no real goal throughout the entirety of the fiction and is quite...unrelatable I suppose would be the best way to describe it. The POV chapters help quite a bit but overall it doesn't seem well thought out. Author rushed the development through the YGGDRASIL arc in order to get straight to the New World arc. This wouldn't have been a problem but...it seems like he had no idea what to do once he got there. Not only did he decide on engaging in a political marriage to take over the Re-Estize Kingdom for some reason, but in the end he refused the marriage and forcefully killed everyone in power anyways (Red Wedding style). Like, what was the point of all the political buildup if you are just going to do a hostile takeover? It made no sense. Then, just like the actual character in the story, author seems to have lost any aim as the plot falls to 'exploring' basically with very little cohesion. In the end, I gave Story Development/Plot 3 stars. Overall, I give the story 4.4 stars. Despite my misgivings, it is still a very well written Overlord fanfiction (one of the few I have found). Umu. . . . .
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