摘要
Amidst the darkness, there was only emptiness and the horizon was nowhere to be seen.
After fainting from practicing martial arts, “Zheng-Fu”, the weak, powerless boy from the Tian-Tang Clan, opened his eyes with unexplainable pain.
“Why is it so dark? What’s happening to me?!”
That was when the memories of him and his previous self “Jin-Yang”, a Xianxia world geek boy, mixed in his brain.
People believed he was useless and could not be a martial artist, bringing dishonor to his father, an Elder of the clan who had great martial arts skills.
Even though he was without power, with the knowledge from his previous world, even the world and heaven had to bow to him!!
Useless and weak child of the clan, huh?
Just wait, he would become the most powerful person of the clan and make his parents proud!!
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I love this kind of story so much. The ML has both brain and power, he always outsmarts some characters and fights well. It is so fun and worth reading. The lead always impresses me, he's so cool and funny at the same time. I may sound like a simp (lol) but he makes the overall of this novel perfect.
This is a normal, standard martial arts novel, maybe this will be another harem novel (I'm not sure tho maybe yes or maybe no). You can read it to kill time, it's quite fun [img=recommend]
I love this kind of story so much. The ML has both brain and power, he always outsmarts some characters and fights well. It is so fun and worth reading. The lead always impresses me, he's so cool and funny at the same time. I may sound like a simp (lol) but he makes the overall of this novel perfect.
A good story-telling is one of the factors that creates a perfect story and makes the story outstanding a lot. Additionally, both practicing Qi and comedy scenes are a perfect fit, they come out very well, good job, author!
This novel is amazing! The author can give us a clear image of an ancient era as well as action scenes. Moreover, I'm so impressed with the ml's action scenes because they're magnificent (There are many martial artist levels for him to break through). And because the ml is so hyper, he can wipe out enemies easily which is the scene that excites me a lot.
I feel like I am reading a manga where the protagonist focuses on only the battle and doesn't care about anything. Even though his actions or words can barely be trusted, when he starts doing, planning, and fighting, we can tell he is powerful and smart. Love him!
Don't miss this novel and please make it mass! The story is kinda like the other Xianxia novels, but the ML's life after he practiced his martial arts skills kinda gives off a chill vibe. First, the obstacle to his practice is his parents who prevent him from practicing martial arts because of love, but later, they can do anything for him too! This is the point I like <3
Even though I am a woman, I am so obsessed with this story. It has been attractive since the beginning. The storyline is mostly comedy, but at the time he battles, this funny kid can turn out to be serious immediately. Therefore, I kind of like the character's dimension because it is clear and easy to understand. The character is not so crazy in power that it makes me stressed.
I feel like this story is not like other martial arts novels and I've been into it since its prologue. The protagonist transmigrated into a good family, I am so happy for him because mostly if the lead isn't born into a cruel family, they are usually born to be a kid who is always bullied or is trash in their family. But this protagonist's family is so good, hope this family will be fine afterward.
Whoaa.. it's amazing! I really love the adventure genre like this so much, especially this powerful ML. Also, there's a scent of One Piece's little bit that the lead wanna follow his dream and fight for his life. The lead will surely become the martial artist king lol. That's the reason why I wanna read and follow til the end.
I really tried to give this story a chance but after struggling to read ten chapters I'll have to drop it. Yes the obvious bot reviews are bad (but that's just playing the game, I get it) but the author might need some classes about writing stories. The story is written sometimes like a Theatre play wright,(basic positioning of things and basic speech lines); then like a normal light novel with proper scenery description and conversations, character descriptions (angry, sad, shocked, etc,) edit: these parts feel like other Stories and their given similar scenes; and then everything is thrown out the window and it's a vomit of speech lines - " ", Double Quotation marks are used both for thoughts and speech - There's no clear distinction to know who is talking and talking to whom. (There's a part in chapter 1 that made me think that the cat actually talked back saying "Hey!") It feels more like a rough draft for a comic/manga then a light novel, being more focused on the speech bubbles and thing that directly affect the MC then the surrounding, the atmosphere and (isn't a must but inner thoughts and feelings ) All together not good but I wish the author luck in future endevavors
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