摘要
A young man, childesh man dies from old age, having his wife dies before him, he dies and meets God who offers him a chance of reincarnation.
in this story God is the Almighty, as the. fictional versions of him are just projections inferior copies of him.
World travel.
expect a harem, mI don't know if it will be one.
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
This story is very interesting, and it had an interesting take in the Naruto universe as the mc is reincarnated as Sasuke and Focuses on gaining power to get to his. Wife who had reincarnated before him in another fictional world. The Mc can be very maudin in situations like when his parents had died. The feeling the author. Described in the end was very real. All in all I love this book although the chapters could improve drastically, he stared the reason and I wholeheartedly agree typo is a *****. Thanks for the story man.
its good... but if the chapters whas a little longer it would be better i think :)...................................................-...............................................................................................................................................................
Although the chapters are short, the story is good and interesting.. and its good that he is reborn as sasuke because many other novels have naruto or his brother or itachi as their main character.. 🤔🤔 the story is overall good 😍👍❤👌soo, just try to write a bit longer chapter and keep up the good work in writing this novel..🌟🌟🌟🌟
this is ****...chps are really short..MC is an idiot..dude just flat out shows everyone his talent..no subtly,,,but fine...then MC gets attacked by anko...my ass she dosnt recognize a genius uchiha heir, she wont flat out attack the kid, plus why would MC train her, pretty stupid, he is a kid, he has no gold finger and he has never killed, whatever he has to offer is useless to a trained assassin that has been through war...****ty writing...also so far MC's wife seems pretty ****ty. chick just abandoned MC and now MC does the cliche **** similar to chinese novels by chasing her...its a dope idea but executed pretty badly...so yah..personally this is garbage, I'd suggest a rewrite cause its actually pretty interesting idea