摘要
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[INDEFINITE HIATUS - REWRITING]
"Wrong my people, you will taste misery and despair. Wrong my loved ones, you will taste suffering and never-ending pain. Wrong my family, you will taste something worse than death itself. Mark my words."
Ichijou Shizuka, a fifteen-year-old girl living her life as a Spirit Wielder and a student, is known as both a genius in art and magic.
Being the "Grand Summoner" of the Ichijou Clan, how will Shizuka face the twisted reality where she can't use magic again? What will she do to fix that?
What was the cause of her mother and sister's deaths? Was there someone behind it? How will she react to the bitter reality fate has brought to her? What will she do when she stands face to face with her brought-up pasts?
"The Law" that bound the clans and tribe for who-knows-how-long–– straining their freedom in their lives and throwing away possible options for them to take.
Will they free themselves? Would they want to, though? The power that was given in an exchange for their freedom–– only to become one's chains and prison.
Follow the adventures of the young Spirit Wielder and her friends on their journeys, finding their true goal in life while rescuing spirits along the way.
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[DISCLAIMER(S)]
•⠀This is BOOK 1 of the "Our Story" Series. It is not completed and is still serializing. Some arcs might be longer than others, as there are battles and details involved. The other books for the series will come when this book is finished.
•⠀The picture I used for the cover is not mine, it belongs to its artist(s). If you are the artist(s) and you want me to take the picture down, I will gladly do so~! Or you can perhaps notify me to give you proper credit(s)!
•⠀This is a work of fiction, none of it is real. If there are any similarities in organizations' names or a person's name, they are all purely accidental.
•⠀This story will be updated when I have time, based on the server time (17.00 GMT+8).
•⠀Under the stage of editing: typos, grammar mistakes, miscast of words, etc. I apologize if you become confused or even received so many notifications for it.
•⠀Some of the characters' names might use spellings for Japanese names.
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[WARNING(S)]
•⠀There will be some killings and blood involved.
•⠀There will also be "slight" cursing, so... brace yourselves.
•⠀Mentions of blood, demons, killing, death, etc. will be up ahead.
•⠀Anime, Japanese, Latin, Greek, and other references from various countries (honorifics, symbols, myths, etc.) will be used in this book and will be altered a bit to match the plot. So, if you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
•⠀Some lines of the characters might be disturbing to some (demons' lines, maniacal laughter, mentions of killing, etc.).
•⠀Please mind these warnings before reading the story. You have been warned.
•⠀If you're starting to feel sick when reading for too long or staring at your screen for a while, please stop reading immediately as your health is more important.
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Started: August 9th, 2020
Completed: ???
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Hmm, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 stars review since I enjoy writing this story and enjoy how it goes at the same time, but readers all have different opinions on books and the genres they like. For this particular book, I wouldn't say that it's exactly perfect. It doesn't use beautiful words like other books I've read as well. I'm only using words available in my vocabulary. From my experience, those who are not native to English have a hard time understanding difficult words and words that are rarely heard in daily lives, such as myself. I have a hard time understanding them, so I would take that into consideration since I know that not all readers are native English speakers. Also, I may have chosen the "Fantasy-Romance" genre for this book. However, must I remind you, this book will mostly focus on the adventure, fantasy, and action aspects rather than romance. That said, I will slip in a few moments of romance into my story, even though I have no idea how to write one, hehe... (forgive me as I have no experience whatsoever in writing romance-related lines and plots). I would say that this book will be leaning mostly towards Anime and Japanese terms, such as dividing the volumes into story arcs and whatnot. However, I will also be using other mythologies and legends from all over and use them as inspiration in my book. Their names might be the same, but their background would not. I am hoping that I will be able to bring readers into my story, as I believe that a good story is a story that's able to bring its readers into its world as if they're living in that world. I AM writing this story out of pure imagination and ideas from watching Animes, reading other books, and looking at pictures or even my own experiences. And with this shameless review, I hope you can enjoy my book~! - Xierryne Author's Note: - I will wait for your honest reviews in the reviews section. - I will try to improve myself more and expand my vocabulary as I write this book. - You are free to point out my typos, misspellings, or even grammatical mistakes. I will try my best to fix them as fast as I can. - This book is still under editing stage when I write this review, so please bear with the typos and mistakes still visible in this book. I am not the best author out there, but I will try to make this book a fun ride for you guys! Thank you so much for giving my book a chance~! Happy Reading~!
This is my second review, so I hope you don't mind... From all the books I've read in the past, this one piques my interest the most, tbh. It's fresh, it's new, the topics of the story are all fun and somewhat relatable, even though it's just a fictional story. Most protagonists would come off as "they knew everything from the start" or that "they're Invincinble" or something. However, Shizuka here isn't. Well, she IS smart, I can tell you that. The way the author portrayed her character was fun to read and watch. She's also not that OP like most protagonists are. Sure, she has an unbelievable power above others, but even she has some flaws here and there. And I like how the author balanced their (the Spirit Wielders') great power comes with great risks as well. It's not impossible to beat them, but it's not possible either without brains. The strategies the author placed in the story are amazing that I had to keep guessing and guessing, only to be amazed by the results and plot twists. All I can say is, a great story isn't a story that has great grammars or even great plots (this story has both), but a great story is a story that brings the readers into it, like they're the ones being in that particular tale. This story is exactly that. It made me imagine that I'm one of the characters in the story. The author changes our perspectives on the story a lot, so I don't really get bored reading it from Shizuka's side of the story only. We can see the other characters' perspectives on the matter, allowing us to also remember their behaviours, thoughts, and sometimes their backgrounds. Since the story and world buildings are in full detail, I can always imagine each scene in mind. The sense of family in this story is immaculate as well, it would be a lie to say that I don't love it. Their jobs and duties, being teens and trying to find their life choices, students and what not-- they're all really fun to read. This story is already over 250 chapters when I posted this review, so I hope it helps the new readers to have a grasp on what I thought on this book! Give a review to this book and support it, because the author gave a fantastic job at writing it! Also note that when I'm writing this review, most of the chapters haven't been edited like the first few ones, so a head's up!
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Wow, just wow. This story has a large world building and it’s very descriptive in both characters and its world. I enjoy the FL and the struggles, the magic, the sense of family in this novel. The author has done a great job! If you read this, you can definitely picture it as a show from scene to scene! Keep it up Author!
I think I gotta write the review now cuz the story hooked me up, and I have not finish reading the whole stuff! The plots are good, the descriptions are on point, i might have a bit trouble remembering who and who at first cause too many characters appear at the same time🤣 And I like the long chapters!! made the wait worth! please keep it up, author! Im gonna anticipate the upcoming ones
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Great imagery right from the very first highly descriptive chapter. I can tell a lot of thought was put by the author into creating this. The grammar is fine too, very smooth in fact. The sheer number of characters introduced in the first chapter might overwhelm some, but I think they will be more defined from each other soon. Keep it up!
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I. Am. Loving. Everything. About. This. Book!!! XD From the characters to the descriptions and details, everything just wows me!! Keep it up, Author-chan!! ^^
I like, scratch that, LOVE everything about his book!!! So much details and world-building. Nothing is perfect, so i don't mind some of the mistakes. Everyone makes mistake, so yeah. You have to read this book, i'm surprised it doesn't receive that much reviews XD
A perfect fantasy. The words itself makes you want to live in the magical world. I didn't realize this but the super detailed world building transported me into the world the author has created. The long chapters can be tedious for some but the lively characters are worth reading for.
This book is really amazing! I came here after i read the author's bc fanfic, and i say... this book got me hooked up, especially when im not a fan of original stories. But this one is just perfecto for me! The plots are really nice, and a lot of details put in into each chapter. The characters are unique and they have their own sides and personalities which complements each other. Im a big fan of Japanese characters, fantasy, and magic, just like bc. This story is an amazing combination of the three of them! Great work author!! I recommend those who like Animes and magic fantasies or something along the line to read this book!!! 10 our of 5 from me.
Oh!! This is soo good for the fantasy genre! I like how the author explains the detail of the characters. I definitely will recommend this to my friends who are into fantasy. Great job author!
A really amazing story with unique characters. Though the reads are a lot, there are only a few reviews, so i'm rating it a full five. If i can votefor a powerstone, i would give you a LOT. Overall, great work!
I have no words! This story is amazing, and i recommend you all fantasy readers to read this book~! The characters are amazing, and i am also somehow relating to the MC very much! There are so many readers! I can't believe only a few of them reviewed this book. I command you all to review and rate this story XD No, but seriously.
This story is so well executed and I am absolutely intrigued! you write so well, miles ahead better than what I hope to write. this is truly a very well developing novel and I am thoroughly enjoying it. the traditions and attire are simply well coordinated and the descriptions are so very vivid. you have amazing world building execution and I hope to learn from you how to execute mine. this book is really a favourite of mine now.
A very expressive novel with a ton of worldbuilding. I appreciated the story spending just enough time on the family dynamics but not getting too mired down in unnecessary details.
Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I am re-reviewing this, since I feel like my last review is too... "meh," or smthg like that-- I just wanna say that... THIS BOOK IS FREAKING AMAZING!!! I recommend those who love a story with a sense of family, or maybe those who love magic and adventures, THIS IS A STORY FOR YOU. The way the story flows makes you imagine that you, yourself is in the story as well. The way the author describes them also makes you imagine the scenes, which was *chef kiss,* PERFECTO. Also, can I just praise how much thought and detail that was put in this book? A M A Z I N G That's all I can say. If there's a word that can describe this book better, it would be... Hmm, "mesmerizing?" or maybe "imaginative" and "descriptive." The world buildings in this book are also great. The way the author describes them is beautiful and just perfecto. The characters are also all so unique, each having their own nature and behaviour-- I especially like the boyssssssss-- They be cyote tho... and YES, I fangirl over the author's beloved boys XD (Don't mind me here, just minding my own business, crazy over all the boys author-chan has created--) The author also balanced between conversations and story narrations, including descriptions and such. The story is divided into different arcs, in which the author decided to divide into volumes. Great job on that! I can imagine how the author is an outgoing and cheerful person since I also imagine her wanting to use kanjis and emojis so bad from her other book, full of character info (Which I am very grateful for). If only Webnovel allows pictures, then maybe the author can put a pic of how her characters would look like XD (So I can simp--) Okay, enough of my ranting... This book is full of mystery and solving stuff too, also teamwork and school days (If you haven't known already), that I exceptionally LOVE. Also, if you read this book, all the things that happened in their everyday lives are sort of the same with how most of us live our lives. I can relate to Shizuka so much -v-; Her brothers are all so fun and unique too! Yuzuru be mah favvvvvvv-- YAAASSSSS!!! (Tho I wanna love Eito so bad, but after realizing he's already freaking married, so no. I'm not that kind of girl XD) Aside from all this, I really love it, so keep up the good work, author-chan!!! Ganbatte-ganbatte!!! NOTE: If I can make this 10 stars instead of 5, I would've done so from the start XD
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