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摘要
Yuki, a normal college student who loves to watch anime and video games, died after finishing the Highschool DxD. Darkness embraces him, his urge and desires granted him his wish to be transported into another world.
Will Yuki change the courses of the events?
Or will he use his powers to fulfill his lustful desires and evil deeds?
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The protagonist is brokenly overpowered but in the first chapters he was still gaining it.
If you really admire Issei Hyoudou then probably this is not for you. Issei is a sidekick at best.
Also Mc nature and ideology is different from others. He is an abomination of lust, using his knowledge to manipulate, blackmail and abuses his powers to conquer everything.
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As all of you guys, I'm not doing this for power stones but if you are interested in the story or some want to give critique about it. Please my only request is give a review in a very honest opinion. The more harsher the better.
I'm just at the beginning of the writing journey so I hope you will help me and I'll be glad if you like it....
I don't own the Highschool Dxd or any other works that I put in the novel. I changed various laws so expect some different powers from the mc.
I got the cover on pinterest if you own that just message me and I will drop it.
Check the tags for more info.
Expect tons of grammatical errors and misspellings. It's my first book in english.
Warning - The contents may be offensive and the writing is vulgar, If you have a faint heart please read at your own risk.
This consist rape, mindbreak and diffirent kind of immorality. So please if you don't like such a thing maybe you can turn back.
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I am a simple man I see MILF I give 5 star. I see no loli and I think the author dodged the fbi. And to fill this 140 words requirement I will write this useless sentence.
The beginning of the novel is meh that i dropped it when im on ch4. But im bored with nothing to do/read(cuz its 3am and inside a car lol), so I read this again. Good thing I did, cuz when the plot start it become better. The story become better in every chapter. Although i dont know about the future, but as of now(ch12); its ok👍🏻
4,5 stars - 1 star = the beginning of the novel is there for the second season. (just for that reason i already drop, more like i said novel level 4.5 stars is good)
MC is not Issei so it gets plus points from that alone. But author-noona has written a masterpiece. An evil MC in general is rare. But noona has pulled it off and i congratulate her for that. Thanks for the hard work 🙏
Ugh so I'm going to give a review my own work. The grammar has a a lot of mistakes, also there's a lot of mispelling in the chapters. I always post so even I'm not in a mood to improve my pitiful writing so I give myself a 5 stars:) What do you expect from the protagonist? Our mc here is evil so don't expect him to be like a goody two shoes or a righteous guy. If you want that character then probably you can drop or find another novel. He forced woman to himself and blackmail then to gain stat points. Like really a lot of mc had a *** using their charms and make their woman delusional so what's the difference? This is not for childrens I already tag R-18. So kids be aware I already put a 17below parental consent. I'm not justifying the mc's personality I myself though that he was a trash scum but who cares? I love writing what I want. To those who don't like Evil Mc who do a lot of bad things then please drop the novel. I know my writing sucks I admit that, I want harsh critique to help me improve my weak points. But I don't need validation for everyone to write. If you love sadistic, and broken protagonist y'all welcome to read. I'm glad for readers to be here;)
Definitely one of the best FF around in this website, I know that I've have only been here for over a year but I have read over 500 FFs and this FF is definitely one of the Top 15 and its really great, the only bad thin is... I guess? the mind break and and rape but overall the plot is very good.(Sorry for the bad English since its like my 5th language and yeah its your choice if you don't want to read this and know that this is only my opinion.)
The MC is a manipulator who was lucky enough to reincarnate in DxD with a System. If you are waiting for a good guy who will follow the canon and make friends with the protagonists. Don't read this.
Overall, from the few chapters I have read it seems to be quite good. The writing quality is the only thing I have a problem with as there are a rather large amount of grammatical errors, mostly simple things like mixing up he and she, but it is still readable especially in comparison to many other works that are on this site. In conclusion, good read, but would be better if the author got an editor or used something like grammerly.
Good grammer and has consistency to the story and sensible time skips. Keep updating and ur book will become famous and we'll respected not only among us men of culture but those noobs too
I’m gonna be very honest, when i first look at tge title i thought “ Another stupid the DXD novel” but Surprisingly this novel is well written. The Mc personality is very good N he not focused on the plot females only. so i give this a 10/10
Not gonna lie, I like the mc's manipulative character . Im fine with the tags as long as there is no NTR. Netori is fine 👌🏻. Can't wait for more updates. keep it up author.
Юки изначально вел себя сдержанно и просто оставался дома. Юки изначально вел себя сдержанно и просто оставался дома. Юки изначально вел себя сдержанно и просто оставался дома. Юки изначально вел себя сдержанно и просто оставался дома. Юки изначально вел себя сдержанно и просто оставался дома. Юки изначально вел себя сдержанно и просто оставался дома.
Here's my two cents on this FF. The MC is emotionally unstable.. extremely sadistic to the point that it's kinda sick.. You know, writing is supposed to be a beautiful Art that draws in readers wanting to read more, but what I read is comparable to.. well, a canvas that's been randomly smeared with excrements.. the only thing I managed to come out with, is wanting to live in the harry potter world so that I can learn "Occlumency", then place whatever I just read into a box and throw it to the deepest and darkest corner of my mind, forgotten forever.. or maybe even take the Lockhart route and obliviate myself.
ceritanya bagus dan saya suka, tapi satu hal yang sangat tak ku sukai, yaitu merebut pasangan orang lain, Tak peduli apakah dia kesepian atau frustasi secara seksual, yang namanya NTR saya tidak suka.
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good and interesing. something different with a protagonist. - For now it is still "weak", but seeing how the protagonist's personality is (I don't think he goes the same way as all the protagonists: "canon", although I would have liked him to be reincarnated or transmigrated into the body of someone who is Op or who has the talent to be, like the original Lucifer, Rias Gremory's father, Zirche Luciger, among other characters, but in conclusion if you like a perverted protagonist but with a brain, then you will do it like the story), just I hope to see how he handles the canon girls, and that he does not fall like the other authors of hischol dxd (which some that I liked, since they took the path that I put in the comment of transmigrating to an existing body, sad that after 15 chapters or less are no longer updated xD).