章節 28: Ch.27.5 「Arc 1 Afterwords」
well....
Hello everyone!
author here, thanks for your support everyone. i wrote this inbetween my job, so if the uploaded time was quite messy, i apologize for the inconvenient.
「Arc」
the 1st arc was actualy to introduce our mc, about whats his past, his power, his character, what his interest and also what his goal.
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Rei still has no exact goal currently, but he will eventually find himself a purpose within the world of onepiece.
「Bounty」
45 million Bellies is huge in East Blue and i did it on purpose.
(1) the marine HQ blame Rei for the lost of more than 350 lives in 8th branch marines. despite most of the victim was due to Nelson command. HQ didn't wants to tarnish their name by admitting the true corruption within their ranks.
(2) additional reason was because which branch he destroyed, i noticed about the peculiarity of 8th branch. it has warships, lots of it and the only scene where marines will use so many warships is when they are doing "Buster Call". So i assume its not too far fetched to say 8th branch is feared within East Blue because of its naval power.
(3) there will be future chapter about the reason why the "White Ghost" getting so much bounty on his head. 45 million is just the beginning.
「Chapters」
(1) there was a complain regarding my lack of capital letter. so i tried to fix it from the next arc forward.
(2) regarding the japanese jargon and terms which i deliberately added for immersion, i try to fix it by giving the explanation via paragraph comments (ongoing)
(3) as always, if you have anything for me to fix regarding the writing. feel free to tell me, i'll try to fix the error one.
stay tuned everyone ...
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