/ Anime & Comics / One Thousand Hands (OC- Senju SI)
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Hashirama Senju didn't have two grandchildren. In this world, he had three. And I just had the luck to wake up in the body of one of them with only twenty years until the most bloody conflict in Ninja history would begin. Survive or die, those are my options.
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寫檢討I’m confused and lost in this entire story. Author only introduced Mc at the beginning but the story went all over the place when he started with different characters POV which just loses the interest of the story
I would prefer if it was in the pov of the mc more instead of others Honestly I skipped a lot of paragraphs cuz it’s a little boring Writing is good but that’s it The plot isn’t great either Honestly I’d love it if the fanfic went into more depth concerning the mc personality and thoughts
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It’s really good, idk why the other put 1 star review. It’s very detailed but also very good at keeping you engaged.
l'histoire est plutot bonne jaime bien comment il a fait le monde et a clairement explique que son monde etait different jaime aussi le fait davoir plein de point de vue sans ralentir l'histoire
Focus less on others and more on the protagonist