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寫檢討Author contradicts himself nearly immediately with the curse remover item. The MC is overwhelmingly OP and pathetic at the same time. Faunas are naturally stronger then humans an she's half mink which are also stronger, yet even with an enhanced body hes still weak. The system itself is majorly overpowered, giving him at the very least 3 devil fruit abilities without drawbacks. The writing itself needs work, along with character design.
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作者 Jovami6729
Honestly the fanfic isn't about rwby no more the mc just gets logia after logia for no reason he gives cinder the flame logia and he gets the ice logia , in my opinion the ice logia is a poor fruit choice for for the mc considering he's a cat faunas mixed with a cat minx you would expect the mc pick a fruit that helps his natural powers like agility and finesse bit he chooses a fruit that basically slows him down