/ Book&Literature / One Piece Ultimate : My Legend
摘要
Mehdi, A scientific on earth. invented a material who can replace oil .but after a few months he was killed by a group made by multinational companies that Extract oil
”I know this was going to happen, but well I had to do it for a better future “. when he closed his eyes he could hear a sound
“Oi, you are not dead yet, so open your eyes “
Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece or anything mentioned in this story from the original manga.
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Alright, first of all, make sure your synopsis is actually readable then start writing chapters. Just from reading your synopsis tells me your writing quality isn't that good. 2 stars cuz ill feel bad if i give u 1 star
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3/5 writing quality but the Author is at least trying to be better, that's admirable. 111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
Would need more chapters and there are many grammar mistakes ………………………………………………………………………….............................................……..
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Great story.....thanks for this another one piece fanfic great.... Keep uploading new chaps...I'm waiting for more chapter to read this so thanks author for this work...@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%good story
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Ecp3xp but I also like novel so... Expexpezp3xp expexpexpepxpdodoxoeodoxododooedklxoxodpdpdpc0x0d00r0rofpd0r9didgrvdgudvehrududduririrututuut
The quality writing is bad, and i dont mind it so whatever. The story so far good, dont know if author want to change it. And mc eat zoan fruit that should belong to Kaido, so we got OP here! I just hope you dont add original character in this, its make it bad if i read op fanfic with it
New concept for one piece fanfiction it's cool liked it man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
"My name is Mehdi, a scientific on earth in a country of North Africa." This is the very first sentence of this story.... If this is a Self-Insert than no wonder its ****. ......................................................................