/ Anime & Comics / One piece: To be a Power in the Depths
摘要
*Warning: High level of Bullshitting*
Sid was your typical average person.
Spending his days in front of his computer while reading Fanfictions and searching for something to appease his boredom.
One day, he left his house to buy a few snacks, however, on his way to the store a flying anvil appeared out of nowhere and smashed his head against the ground, killing him instantly.
Seemingly being chosen by GOD for no special reason at all, he is given three wishes and a mission to kill an evil anomaly in One piece world. An anomaly with absolute power and incredible strength that could even make the four Yonkō tremble against its presence.
Sid, now with a mission to kill this absolute horrifying being, and his desire to become a hidden power in the shadows like a certain guy with the same name as him did in a manga, trains to become the strongest transcendent existence at night, and acts as the most normal mob character at day.
The most dangerous pirate, the strongest admiral, the most revolutionist Revolutionary(?)
Why be just one when you can be all of them and a normal marine side character at the same time?
This is the story of a seemingly "Normal" marine. Training and becoming the strongest man alive, without anyone noticing!
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One piece is not mine, just in case you didn't know...
I just own the MC... I think?
iThe cover was made by me B)
In case you have read "Kage no Jitsuryokusha ni Naritakute" and the adventures of Shadow-sama, then just so you know, MC is not the same as that manga, they just had the same name because I couldn't come with a better name.
Also, MC will not be as dense as Sid was... maybe.
Anyway, that's all.
Hope you like it!
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So you read the eminence in shadow too huh? Nishishi just for that you already get 5 stars from me weeb....keep them updates coming.........
I expected something similar to the eminence in the shadows which inspired this. Unfortunately, it fails completely. It's just a regular OP main character hiding his strength. What makes eminence in the shadows hilarious is how he fails at being a mob which leads to funny consequences (e.g, practicing all his moves on how to lose a tournament one after the other which makes him seem tenacious af thereby failing at being a mob completely) If you want a perfect power in the shadows wherein the main character is OP af and hides it well then this is good for you. If you want something similar to eminence in the shadows wherein the main attraction is his hilarious fails in being a mob and the different misunderstandings with both his subordinates and his supposed mob life then this is definitely not something you'd want to read.
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Well, at first it was fun to read. Sid Kageno was actually a lot better than your MC. Why? Because he isn't always behind the scene or being MOB. He also flexes. He also goes around being super cool dude infront of his followers. At first it was cool. But, alter it became boring as MC is just MOB. All he does is being MOB. Like, he also has his moments but his actual flexing moments are just few sentences or a paragraph while his MOB journy is explained a lot.
I like your first ff so I came to check this one and it good hope you keep going ............................................................
Writing Quality (5) -No problem with it. Very easy to read and follow. Story Development (5) -The pace is quick but it avoids unnecessary filters. Character Design (4) -It's the usual 'I wanna be a shadow eminence' Updating stability (4) -Like 4 - 6 chaps a week so that's decent. World Background (4) -Could have used more descriptions on stuff. Overall, read it as it is worth your time.
I have a question, where did you get the idea for this fanfic, I ask this because its VERY unique, I feel that you got it from a manga called "eminence in the shadows" but thats just my thoughts, you get a free 5 stars since you have 50 chaps on your other novel, so I trust that you will make it far with this one
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Shadow-sama ahhh I see take this 4 star . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Don't mind me, I'm just mob characters....... There's nothing to see here....... ..... .. . ... ......... . .. .. ... .. . ... .. ..... . ..
My bad my bad. Forgot to update even though I’ve been following this from the start.... Hmm let’s say that the concept is different, not new but different from your usual fanfic where mc either becomes a marine, a pirate, joins luffy’s crew. This one is kinda chuuni (but you know it from the start so it’s not cringe, you just accept it) and he likes to play the mob character while being secretely OP. There is a possible second mc in this world other than luffy who will join the marines and our mc Acts as one of his mob friend that keeps getting his help but doesn’t bave the talent to progress at the same speed. Mc has the ability to change forms so he can bave different personalities so for those whi hate it when the mc only hides his powers, then he will reveal his actual strength when he take on a different appearance. Oh right, the way the story is going, he will probably won’t follow canon unless he makes an identity to travel along the straw hats but that will be in the future.
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10/10 Please upload more author. ......................................................... ... ...............................................
This author doesn't miss, guys. Like seriously... It's not even funny. I recommend trying out both of their works. I love the mixture of action, humor, and adventure in both of his works. I can't promise anyone will like this but please do give this a try.
Good idea ig Wishes were terrible and it Kinda got annoying wit you day moB so many times but then again i just dont like thing where they hide to this extent but good idea keep it up
I want to be honest, this is the best one piece fanfic I have ever read on WebNovel, the spirit continues for the author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I actually forgot to add my own review until now. Anyways, what can I say, I'm still a writer I training and I tend to make some mistakes while writting, and the only thing that makes me not vote with 5 stars is the fact that I usually only have the energy to write one chapter everyday. Yet I have to write for my other fanfiction too, so there's days I just don't feel like writting a chapter. Anyways that aside, MC may be a bit chunni, but he will devote his all to becoming the best chunni. To the point it may make you laugh on how compromised is him with his goal of becoming a shadow eminence. That's all for my review, if you want to know more then check the fic yourself! Peace.