/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: The Strongest Swordsman
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Summary:- Yoriichi was born in the one-piece world with a strange mark on his face which was considered a demonic mark by his family, and because of that his father and other family members despise him like he is cursed but the only person who deeply loved him was his mother despite the face he was born with
Yoriichi was very different from other children his age due to the fact he never showed any emotions on his face nor did he speak anything which made his family believe that he was mute
Unfortunately due to an unknown illness, his mother died soon as he reached the age of 10, and with that, his father got a chance to get rid of him as he sold him to slave traders who took him to The Holy Land Mary Geoise as a slave
Let's see how will he escape from that place and begin his journey as the strongest and undefeated swordsman in this one-piece world
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Your novel is weird. It's like telling a story of a mother who doesn't like hurting living beings. In the world of One Piece, having such a nature is not good, you stupid writer. A bad novel with other silly MC traits.
A clear example of how to ruin a fanfiction in 2 chapters, amazing[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
An author's recommendation: dedicate more time to this fic that can still be saved than to the others because the protagonist of this story seems more like a secondary character than the Mc [img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
There's not much to say about this fic, it's very bad, a very slow story and so out of logic, a boring, empty and clunky protagonist that the only thing I manage to awaken in me is an incredible boredom I don't understand how anyone can like a protagonist who doesn't show any emotion and all he does is nod and act like a fool
A naïve, boring, silly and weak protagonist, if he hadn't had that 10-year training with the Dark King, the story that the author wants to interpret would be more believable, but unfortunately it's not like that [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This fan fic is not worth wasting your time. This is prolly gonna be dropped soon and author is not consistent at all. The character design is good but doesn't suit the theme at all.
In the last few chapters, the supposed 10-year training with the Dark King himself went to waste [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Just horrible. The MC is a beta robot that wont kill a guy even if he is graping his mother. But thats not it, he is the strongest swordman that used haki in seconds but 10 years after of trainning he cant break a door... this is extremely stupid and full of contradictions. In one chapter Shakky teached him everything about the world but 5 chapters sfter he doesnt know what a shishibukai is. Yeah, just horrible.
I'll change my assessment of this work when it will be edited.. For starters, it would be nice to at least write the name of the main character with a capital letter[img=faceslap]
Quick review . Another book from the author of DXD: Shadow Monarch and Danmachi: The Blind swordman. All of his books are good and I'm expecting this too to be good. So far the story setting is good, which is the one piece world. But not any just main character from one piece , the mc here is the father of demon slayers which is Yoriichi. now this is where it gets exiting because I'm curious how Yoriichi will live here because he is a child here and we're at one piece world . will he still learn breathing techniques ? or will he have a devil fruit ? or just haki ? If you're interested in finding out, you should definitely read the book! (potato out, rate it also if you found it good)
Its awful like really bad its not consistant mc too nice even after being sold by his dad and being trained by one of the strongest characters author makes him seem strong in the summary but after 10 years of training which luffy only took 2 was able to learn conquerro. and author made him have immense talen more than luffy just don't read it i'll say...
yeah I'm dropping this shit makes no sense at all he is too nice and he Acts like a background character and how fast he got strong literally is rushed
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Jezzz so many bad reviews, why? this story is not that bad, it deserve much better Reviews,you guys are just bunch iof haters and trash talkers, you expected what,? this is FanFictionthis is author own vision.
Please continue. The novel is excellent and deserves four stars We watch the fights against Mihawk 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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The biggest problem with this story is the MC. 10 years of training, 10 years, and he remains the same empty, hollow shell. And it's not a matter of waiting for chapters, it's logic. If you wanted to keep the MC like a potato and develop it little by little, there would be no point in doing this training during this time. It's torturous to read how he walks and acts even though he's that age, that training, and his "ability."