/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Strongest King System (Dropped)
摘要
Narmi Amsi, a 15 years old teenage boy, got transferred into another world, becoming a world traveller in process. Fate did not abandon him as he got ahold of a power that could help him in his journey.
King System, a generous system that would help its host become a King of the World. With this power bestowed onto him and memory of future events, he embark on a journey of fulfilling what the system want him to be.
Follow him on his journey, meeting new members, finding love and fighting the world wherever he went. Watch him as he become the most fearless existence, and finally become the King of the World.
"They say the Family of D. is the sworn enemy of the Gods. They didn't say about another existence that could rival the Gods. Me!" - Narmi
Disclaimer: One Piece is not mine. I'm just writing a fanfiction only for fun purposes.
Author's notes: I change the synopsis, as I planned to send our MC to another world after he is done in One Piece World. This synopsis is temporary as it will change again when the story nearing its end.
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.....good fanfic don't stop updated.... ........good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated............good fanfic don't stop updated.......
If you are serious, I will support, but what's the thrill if there is one piece in the world that only focuses on the harem? One Piece is an adventurous world!
Hye. Wow I'm first to review. It's story is starting to develop so I don't know about coming chapter. I hope the author will make some good chapter. I'm looking forward to it. Although the character name sound weird, I think everything is okey from my viewpoint because I like OP character. Brcause they can kick some ass. Hope this character will always kick some ass
Ok so this story looks good so far. The updates are consistent, the grammar actually doesn’t suck(sure there’s mistakes sometimes) especially if you consider the fact 2 chapters are up per day. Overall the mc has a brain and can think, so far it’s good. Keep up the good fanfic author!
This is too early to make a proper review of the story, but it has potential, and I definitely look forward to more updates! I hope the story will include some romance, you don't see it that often in One Piece fan-fics.
It's totally garbage... Its like author have no clue about one piece world......... Do yourself a favour get out fast as you can............
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Everythings are good ...i like it a lot and its enjoyable to read.. so good job ... and thank you for the story..keep up the good work...PIECE...
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Bruh I was hyped to read this fanfiction but it is dropped that is not the problem it the fanfiction from over 70 chapters just to just one atleast let people enjoy reading the over 70 chapters than giving them false hope.
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not bad good fanfic maybe 10 chapters a week if its alright but its a good story as far I comprehend.
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Review at chapter 14 currently :D First of to the writing quality. You could say the chapters are nice cause they are rather "long" if u compare it to many other fanfics. But the english is pretty bad grammarwise. English quality is around second year gymnasium(school) with a C i would say roughly. For the updates part there is currently nothing to complain about. Regular updates and more than 1 chapter a day usually. The Story developement is rather new thats why 4 stars for it. He doesnt follow the mainplotline and makes his own. The character design is rather bleak in my opinion. First thing is personal but i dont like the mcs name and the name of the crew. Name feels like an mtl from an hyroglyph which the mtl doesnt really now :D :/. Furthermore it confuses with the story slighty or better said u have to read twice sometimes cause name is in his crew too. Crewname etc really sounds slightly chuunibyou :/ same with some dialoges. For the last part of the World background there isnt much to say currently. Seems like the normal OP background but it is currently too early to say much about it. But i guess people who are unfamiliar with OP-verse would have to read some things up to understand some story parts. If the author reads this heads up :P Guess u just need a bit more practice for ur english if u are interested in developing urself. For the story part etc its mostly about the preferences from the readers but well my honest opinion is stated here and i even wrote a long reply for it on a broken keyboard :'D
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