/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Starting in God Valley as a Slave
摘要
Carl from the Earth traveled to the world of pirates and became the prey of Celestial Dragons in Valley of Gods.
There is no system, no cheat. The only way Carl can think of to break the game is to find the best Devil Fruit hidden in Valley of Gods!
However, he originally targeted the Paw-Paw Fruit, but discovered Dark-Dark Fruit!
Just when he was thinking about slaying the Celestial Dragons in the future, Garling, the leader of the Knights of God, suddenly appeared in front of him and told him....
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Really good story, at least the best of my fanfics. I like that it's not a canon time, the MC's unusual ethnicity, pretty quick development, he's become powerful, but it's grounded so it's not like it just fell out of the sky
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It is a really good story about and I loved the dark fruit development. The story starts right after the God Valy fight. The only thing that irks me is the romance chapters. It is a bit too much and hopefully this story will not go to the slice of life routine. Instead of embellishing the girls in the story I would like to see the MC a bit more rational in developing his own powers, bloodlines and skills. Also give a bit more room to Kim’s and other characters that can actually help him instead of the heavy romance.
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Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas paginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos 💪
The story begins in a timeline before the start of the anime, which is quite common in One Piece fanfics. It's a little difficult to determine the MC's personality, the only objective he has so far is revenge on a certain person, in addition to some characters appearing to be very submissive towards the MC. So far (chapter 50+-) the novel is going well, but it needs to delve deeper into the protagonist and give a little more personality to the secondary characters.
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So far, this is already one of the top 5 one piece fanfic I have read. story and character building is surprisingly great, it is very interesting. update rate is good too. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Enjoying the fic so far. MC has pretty good development and we get to see a different side to the one piece world.
I like mc devil fruit but this story feel like there little element of young master it will be great if u change something that are too chinese. 😁😁😁 this ff are great overall
Great story so far and the world building around the secrets of the celestial dragons and dark fruit is amazing. if it keeps up this pace it might just get better and better. can't wait for how everything will play out. If i have to say something bad about it is that gion is somehow the same age as akainu/ kizaru. they 3 including kuzan were known as monsters within the marine and somehow she thought that she is better than them which seems weird and off but AU things doing AU things
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