/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Reincarnated with a system
摘要
The typical MC dies and gets reincarnated with a system in one piece world.
I do not own One Piece or any other characters from any series which can be referenced.
Things to expect from the fan fiction:
1. MC will be a pirate. Will have emotions, and morals and will act like a true leader to the crew (sorry no Reverend Insanity-like protagonist). Also, no harem and romance will not be very important. Will not join straw hats but maintain a good relationship with them. The reason will be explained in the story.
2. This will be an AU, but nothing major, just some minor age and small stuff might be changed for my convenience. Few characters will be based on mythology and (probably) any other series
3. MC will have a gamer-like system but there will be no stats, inventory, or player level-up but there will be skill leveling, missions, and shop. More about the system will be disclosed throughout the story. The system will activate after a certain time, and the user will not get the system right from the start. It will probably activate in the third arc or before.
4. No devil fruit for MC. It will be pure haki, martial arts, weapon mastery, etc.
5. Speaking of weapon mastery, MC's fighting style will include a sword on one of the hands, a gun on the other, and also kicks, so a versatile style I would say.
6. Guns/Marksmanship will also be explored here, also other martial arts.
7. English is not my mother tongue so please bear with it. However, I will use some free online grammar correction tools.
8. Constructive criticism is always welcomed. Might also take meme references, jokes, etc from other sources. However, if you don't like it, don't read it. Don't bother causing havoc in comment section. There will also be plotholes, which I might not solve since it involves rewriting (paragraph comments get deleted of the entire chapter). So, if you are very particular about plotholes, I think this is not for you.
9. Updates will be irregular because I have a job. I am writing this as a hobby. Therefore even with power stones, I cannot guarantee more updates, but any power stones will still be appreciated.
10. Lastly I might go with some theories because the canon story is not complete, but if later canon proves the theory wrong, then it can't be helped.
Now please enjoy it.
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Author shameless review here. Just wanted to let you all know, please rate and review this fanfiction. Whatever rating this fanfiction deserves according to you, please rate and review it. I leave the rest to you.
good job and keep this fan-fic up please many people just drop one piece novels that involve systems. muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda muda
Its a really really great story!!! I love how MC/Jai became strong through a process or time, not suddenly became an OP.. I also like how Jai not have system from start, so he doesn't became dependable to system and become a weak (he train from early age).. 👍👍👍 It's a little weird when you have a character not from another anime or story (zabuza, haku, thor, hercules, etc), but it's ok.. I still like your story 😍😍 Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍
Well done Buddy👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽✍🏼✍🏼✍🏼✍🏼👌🏽👌🏽👌🏽✍🏼✍🏼
Pretty nice👍🏼 The Development and the Story Progress is pretty well……………………………………………………………….…………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………..
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
hey author can you make the mc act like jack sparrow ....................................................................................................................
Gosto muito , finalmente um MC sem fruta do do diabo Op. É bom finalmente ver uma fanfic com um MC que use armas, artes marcias e haki. Espero que continues um bom trabalho.
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Sometimes , a few things are unclear, but then overall good. Updates are decent. Almost 1 chap everyday Story is good. There are some inconsistency but can be overlooked. Character design, has yet to be shown. Describes many things of the world background and try to go further.
The history Is so good, the OC have a nice trama and good nakamas. for now, the reading is good and entertaining, wait how it develops the different plots 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🥰
Great story so far (chapter 10), there is some weird dialogue for plot exposition during the first chapters but if you continue after that, this fanfic is great. Timeline is mastered, progression is ok, power is good but not instant cheat like a lot of chinese novel were Mc wake up and go full 'couting death' after 2 day of training , so great fanfic so far imo
fanfic muito boa finalmente um personagem sem fruta do diabo,espero que continues com o bom trabalho pois não há muitas fanfics de one piece novas.
I'm just gonna give this a 5 star because this is one of the few mc that actually have marksmanship, I will add more after i read it........
You draw my dream character in your novel I always wanted charcter carrying gun and sword and master material arts thaks given then pis always update chapter your story
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Pretty good👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Finally a MC without devil fruit!!! Lov it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!