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摘要
Leo an avid One Piece fan suddenly finds himself in a world where the One Piece manga series never existed.
At the same time, a new VRMMORPG game called One Piece Online suddenly exists and is set to release in 1 week.
Join Leo as he uses his One Piece series knowledge to become the greatest player in the game.
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my guy or my woman when are you going to release another this fanfic is awesome and also tell me if there's haters are there haters are people hating on this fanfic cuz it's a real good fanfic in my opinion cuz I don't remember another person trying to make a fanfic on One Piece that's like a game of One Piece instead of them just being transported inside the world of One Piece so it's a really unique concept right now to me cuz I haven't found another book like yours so I just want to keep reading it or fanfic don't know which one to call it
Giving it 4 for now, I'll change after I read it. Onto the spam, 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for the moment I give this note I will wait for developments from the Mc (his mentality) and hope that there is more explanation on certain things before I decide to increase the stars