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What would happen if you suddenly found yourself in One piece world?
Of course become pirate king.
Join Arya as he uses his knowledge from his previous life to become the "King of Pirates".
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Definitely a very unique one piece fanfic. The characters are likable and the interactions are enjoyable. Also the first author in while that I've seen take advantage of the any different islands in one piece, not just cannon ones. At the time of writing this there are only 8 chapters, but it's already displaying incredible potential. 10/10 would reccomend you try and read.
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Your novel is original and unique. You're doing a great job. But you should change your synopsis or put a synopsis. It will attract the readers. I wouldn't have read this novel if it wasn't for a review saying that Ace joined MC crew and I would have missed this amazing story. Eg: '12 months that I got here and is serving as a slave, this is my chance to make it great. I will gain this fruit and better my life.' This was Arya thought while stealing the Toro Toro no mi. Now he set himself a goal : 'King of Pirates, why not? It would be entertaining' And for that: Step 1: Train Step 2: Gain strong crew member. Ace would be a good choice (Canon? What is that?) Step 3: .... It's a very bad synopsis but it will at least attract more readers Good job and make more chapter for our(my) enjoyment.
His crew can use haki but the mc whi is the Captain has NO aptitude for haki at all lol he is a follower but is leading people who are leaders it’s so sad... was enjoying this novel but mc is pathetic... he is the strongest on his crew only because of the author but if it was actually one piece he wouldn’t even be lol he can’t use haki he’s probably weaker but more confidence than pre timeskip Nami if he didn’t have his df.... this is the new review
It's a great Story i Hope you wraite the Story to the end IT would bei a Same if you didnt i realy Like the story. J h
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one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end. one of the best OP fanfict I read I highly recommend. author is doing a wonderful job, I hope to read until the end.
It's New and interesting concept for a story. I can't say much without receiving spoilers except i liked it very much. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I realy Like your story and Hope you Update I realy Like your story and Hope you Update I realy Like your story and Hope you Update I realy Like your story and Hope you Update I realy Like your story and Hope you Update
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I hope you update the story I hope you update the story I hope you update the story I hope you update the story I hope you update the story
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Your ideas are creative but the bad formatting and grammar make it much harder to enjoy them. You should find a beta/ editor man 😅 Regardless thanks for sharing your writing and good luck 💪🏻
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REALLY LOVE IT!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! PLIZ UPDATE!!!!!!! ........................................................................................
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Well what you can get from general audience fanfic, the mc is almost like sanji all flirt and weakness for female but nothing happen. The idiot even fight other pirate and got captured with his entire crew for prostitute that dont even want saving
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I'm really disappointed when he cant use haki cause I prefer it if the Mc is strong physically with strong haki than having a devil fruit... But overall it's still Great!!!!
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never written a review before but i feel the need to inform others now before they find out later and react in a harsher way. The mc is a pirate captain that has zero aptitude for haki(four members of his crew can use haki, ace being one of them and remember that in cannon ace has conquerors and armament but cant really use them plus was a commander for whitebeard ) and uses a logia df but says he wants to be king of the pirates. In one piece that is both suicide and impossible because every powerhouse in one piece has haki so his fruit becomes pointless. The new world is literally called the pirate or df graveyard because anyone that goes there and doesn't have haki or is protected by someone powerful that does dies. All of his future fights( and by extention the story) will be nothing more than being saved by his more powerful crew members and plot armor because not having haki while having a logia df in one piece basically means he is weak and cant beat anyone in the areas that all the important stuff happens in that he has to conquer to become pirate king. I'm not saying this to discourage the author. I am in fact still reading. I just want to be honest and give my opinion while also giving others a heads up so they know going in what to expect and not go in blind and potentially draw negativity to the author