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摘要
Few can ever claim to be the best at anything in the world, yet he achieved it. No target has ever lived when targeted by his blade.
But the price for being the best was death, yet he dived in head first for his only goal.
When he thought everything was over and he could finally rest with a smile, he realized it was just the beginning.
With his dream already completed with his passing, he must find a reason to live. Or maybe just enjoy his newfound freedom?
(I don't own the cover photo or anything related to One Piece.)
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5/5 Writing quality: It's good, it's readable, much better than other writers. 5/5 Stability of updates: It's been daily so far, but I prefer quality over quantity. 4/5 Story development: The story so far is in the early stages but I do like what you are planning to do. 4/5 Character development: Once again, the story is in the early stages, but hopefully you can develop the MC and his crew well so we can know their personality's. 4/5 World Background: This story takes place in one piece so it's not completely original, but I do like what you are doing, the fruit works pretty well for this world. -- I'm gonna guess this story is mainly for r-18, but hopefully you can also build the plot well, the fruit is pretty original, I can't remember a fruit like this being used, but if it has, it probably wasn't even used in one piece, so this original, most readers prefer quality over quantity, so instead of always updating daily, why not every 2 days (it could be daily if you think of something good) and make the story better plotwise. Don't feel obligated to always listen to a person's comment, especially if they want you to change the story (to a big degree especially). If you don't feel well, don't feel obligated to always make a chapter. Good Luck!
Amazing need more chapters for a actual detailed review but neverthless I can’t wait for more keep up the great work !!!!!🙏🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Please don't drop! their is a criminal lack of Incubus fics on this platform....................................................................
I don't know why its hard to find, but one of my top 10 One Piece fan fiction... I just hope the author would not dropped this.. This novel deserve to be known
What should i say? This story was my favourite until he genderbent his whole harem into men.. **** he used an excuse that men are stronger so wtf now.. also barely any R18 chapters so if youve come for that forget it
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
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Just an idea stuck in my head. I don't know if anyone will want to read it so I just posted it. This story won't be very good but its nice practice for the other Fanfics I wana write.