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摘要
The year 1522.
In area 13, which is located on the island of Saboundy Archepelago, there is a building that has a sign that reads “Guild” neatly installed in front of the entrance of the building.
The guild itself is a place where people who want to register as adventurers, report the missions they have completed in order to get rewards, and also go on adventures in dungeons freely while increasing their strength.
In just a few moments of appearance from this place, the Guild began to become something that attracted the attention of various powers.
World Government.
Navy.
Emperor of the Ocean.
Revolutionary Army.
Pirate.
Kingdom.
Individual.
Each of them carried the hope of being able to conquer the place called the dungeon, especially when they knew the benefits they could get after mastering the place.
Then, how does this story continue?
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Truthfully I like the previous version better even if the characters and the world building were a little off. Seriously, couldn't read past chapter 3 of this one . Too much info dump and the MC behaves in a cringe manner. The limitations placed in dungeon make it seems like a video game. I mean bro what's the meaning of no one will die even when killed only loose some level and then you add even if NPC's are killed they will also revive....... Bro it's a pirate world for crying out loud here people slaughter entire countries for no reason and you just came with a way to empower them without any risks......... Well all in all a huge disappointment.
As of chapter 5 Too much details, not enough adventuring, let the characters discover the dungeon with the reader. Otherwise a good concept
No personality, no logic and a very lousy writing. Not recommended at all. Nothing really interesting happens. ---------------------------------------------------------------
It has potential honestly it's just 4 chapters but i love it i hope you don't drop it
I have read 41 chapters so far and honestly, I am forcing myself to read more. The first 10-12 chapters are info dumps and the dungeon is not original. It is just the Danmachi dungeon without the gods and with other anime shops included. The characters are completely one-dimensional and so is the MC. The worst part about this entire story however is the WRITING. The writing is absolutely horrendous and it is very hard to read and get immersed into. The story is littered with incorrect grammar and spelling mistakes. Author if English is not your first language then you need to put a disclaimer in the synopsis cause the writing was atrocious. Also, soooo many one piece character names were wrong. An example is when he calls Mihawk "eagle eye" instead of "hawk eye". This is just one of many examples. Overall I am disappointed because this could be a decent story if the writing was not so bad.
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the plot is about danmachi, but without the waifus and without the gods, all involved in the world of one piece, a bad idea They should have chosen another world since the one in the open piece doesn't match.
This whole novel feels like something written by a non-english speaking 5th grader, both in grammar and the cohesiveness of the story. Main complaint is that characters are acting completely different from their cannon counterparts and are way too trusting of the MC
Need more.....................................................................................................................................................
It's a great One Piece fanfiction.. I like it!!! 👍👍😍😍 This fanfiction quite different from another OP Dungeon I read before, but it's great too.. It give detail about Dungeon, and make a dungeon like in RPG game.. Author sama, are you make the NPC from another anime (like Soma and Joushirou. And Sarasa)?? It's quite interesting.. There just a few wrong grammar/spelling/word, but I still understand it.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author sama... 😁😁👍👍👍
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The Main issue is the grammar, its hard to read, use grammarly or A.I. to correct the grammar. Then there is to much explanation, its takes to long when it can be explained properly in shorter time so there is much time for the adventure story part, and ita supposed to be a dungeon so the story should have more story about the dungeons adventure part. But over all if you get past the grammar, its an ok story
This story is fairly good, however it spends far too much time covering the background portion. Also, it has an incredible amount of grammatical errors, and use of incorrect words. If you hate bad grammar you will not make it through the first few chapters, but the story is a good concept.
............................................................................................................................................................ Its good. Now... WHERE IS THE REST!