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Seth died because he got hit by "Car-kun" when trying to save a little girl who crossed the street and got reincarnated in the world of One Piece.
join him and his adventure to become one of the strong forces in the world of One piece.
All credits goes to Oda for creating this magnificent Manga/Anime
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Very bad grammar, missing letters and words, the actions of the mc are a nonsense and the interactions between the characters are weird and the "romance" with Hancock is cringe as f*ck. The basics rules of writting aren't respected, there is almost no commas in ths novel and the author seems to have a thing with capital letters as well.
Frankly I do not understand why there are so many 5 stars. it's horrible to read, there are good ideas but it's just badly said and too much time skip.
Well, the story sucks.. The Author need some self reflecting sessions about the plot and gramatical errors Overall it Average at best.. But hell im a One Piece Brain dead fans... Just keep those chapter Updating and screw the plot or grammars error.. That can't stop me for reading this novel.. I fvcking hate you author for those gramatical error and the plot holes... and.. I fuvking love you for the making this one piece novel come true.. Yeah im stupid and a brain dead fans.. So what..?? BITE ME..!!!
it a one piece fanfic so you can't go wrong. the problem it is the high popular beta with a super chad complex novel. where the mc goal in life is to have beautiful women. which is not a big deal. but omega males like this just shows why they don't get women. the is obsessed with the main case of girls nami and robin that he wish to join the strawhats just to f**k them and turn them in his property. he meets hancock and with in 2 days they are kissing. the next chapter she says i know nothing bout you tell me about yourself like they just become acquaintance after kissing. i can't see how people can read that type of romance when they are always yelling about NRT. i feel like a cuck reading about a guy traveling the world f***king girls with in a few minutes of interaction
halo this novel is epic hope you don't drop it a suggestion , imagen if red could make more clones and each clone could have different devil fruit , now imagen if he could fuse them and make a dubbel edge scythe-like in dark siders 2 (death) scythe ,and each blade having the correspondent light or glow like one blade be covert in flames en the second in lighting or different element gush ... gush (lava) not saying that you have to kill akainu but it would be epic and thx for the chapters
I really really really really really love this story ☺️ 😍 😍 so I just have to give this story thumbs up 😄 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 . 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍🏽 👍🏽 👍🏻
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I just found and read your novel to the present chapter. And found it to be a well written novel, with decent update. Gave lower story and world background ratings due to it only having slight changes, though I know you can't really change much of the story line, while being under 60 chapters. Development of MC and Pirate crew is very interesting and use of devil fruits. Liked the idea of Hancock stepping down and Margret with the blood blood fruit becoming the new empress. I hope you continue this novel and eventually make this Fan Fic into your own version to where can feel like your own work.
halo this novel is epic hope you don't drop it a suggestion , imagen if red could make more clones and each clone could have different devil fruit , now imagen if he could fuse them and make a dubbel edge scythe-like in dark siders 2 (death) scythe ,and each blade having the correspondent light or glow like one blade be covert in flames en the second in lighting or different element gush ... gush (lava) not saying that you have to kill akainu but it would be epic
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Here are 5 stars as a thanks for the story. Atm i have nothing to read and this popped up. I dont care about the grammar i red a lot worse books then this. Good luck in writing Author.
This novel is really good... Keep on writing... I cant wait to read more...try to add some strong enemies for seth in the war. 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
personally this story seems one deminsional the mc just suck in general and feels forced and has a stupid personality. there is a lot wrong imo with this
If you want a few tips on how to continue the story just read on. Otherwise this was an amazing fanfic and I would honestly love to see if you could keep this up. Here’s the ideas: How about you try writing up to the battle after Im and being recognised as the ruler of the world. Also you could have his son being kidnapped to kickstart the battle. After that how about a short arc with him exploring all of the seas, finding all the mythical place like the all blue (honestly for this I’m assuming it’s directly below the reverse mountain cuz that’s the most logical way), Elbaf, and the other places. You could also add him fusing the world devil fruit with a clone and get him to reunite the super continent Pangea to be the true ruler. And you can add more kids during this. Plus add in a bit more to the family part of the commanders who are single, and whitebeard. You could add in the annihilation or the celestial dragons. After this you could either finish it or continue on. If you are continuing, then you could have him marking the one piece world with the Mark devil fruit or maybe a space devil fruit, and have him travel to other anime worlds. You could have him meeting god again and being given the choice to either restart the story or continue onwards to another world. Also give him the ability to take his family and friends with him, or you can do the simple thing and just bind the world to his soul, allowing him to be the true ruler of the world and then he would be able to take care of his family. Or you could give him something like a personal world where only the people he allows can enter. And you could set a reasonable time dilation cuz you don’t want him to miss out on his family time too much while he’s in a different world. There should also be a limitation on the world where for the moment only Seth can enter, and the rest have to stay behind. Plus you could add a few more girls if you want by feeding him an energy or stamina related devil fruit. It’s not like the readers know all the devil fruits so it should be fine. (There’s already a lust devil fruit that Lilith had so it’s possible.) There are a lot of words to start off with some being insanely strong. You should decide if you want the story to end quickly or to keep it going. If you want to end it quickly then just send him to an op world and get him to get stronger and reach The top in one go. If you want to drag it out a bit, then get him to travel through different worlds and spend a few years in each to get the highest powers, plus a girl or two. Plus get the god to him and his girls a few hundred years per world conquered or just outright make him immortal and let him enjoy the travel between worlds. Put like a pier restriction for his friends and family to enter the new world. Like have to have IM’s strength level or Hagoromo’s strength to enter the Naruto world. If by this time or any other time you get bored writing, either just drop it or write the best scenes of each world. If at any time you want to finish up, just say that Seth got strong enough to hide his world from every other influence, and lived happily ever after. Maybe a short story about his wives and kids later on. I have more ideas but honestly I have no clue whether you’ll write up to this point or not, so we’ll see how it goes. If you need help just ask :)
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Sis, can I publish your story on whatpad in Indonesian? Oif I may publish your story on whatpad in Indonesian, I am very grateful because your story is very good
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Good novel..love it..more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more..tqvm
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Hope you could finish this great novel man, it means a lot to our fan fiction reader who really like something different from main story. Appreciate it<
This novel is like you accidentally step on dog dung. You know what I mean. I am quite surprised this is high rated. The story does not follow the typical norm on one piece, the MC is a big egocentric guy, justifying himself and contradicting himself at the same time, a big paradox. The world development well it is one piece no originality in there. The writing quality is below adequate I need to re-read a paragraph only to envision the scenes the author want to convey. Update is fine. Character development seems ****ty, the mc is like a standard chinese web novel Protag that goes like everybody is wrong I am the only one who is right. Overall I have this 1 star bec. Of my own disappointing views on this story.