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摘要
Adam, a 20-year-old boy, wakes up in a boat in the middle of nowhere, surrounded by the endless sea and without a single knowledge of navigation, is forced to wander aimlessly.
Several months later, just when I thought there was no more hope for him, one. A girl with orange hair tackles the ship to steal everything it contains.
After meeting her, Adam realizes that he has traveled through a different world full of dangers and threats to a normal person like him.
Adam will decide to follow the future navigator and companion of the future pirate king while trying to discover how he came to this world and if there is any way to return, however, while the time is passing, Adam realizes that his body is not as normal as He thinks and he has a lot of strange abilities.
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The biggest problem of this story is is Google translation spanish ->english The story seem to begin good but you can't be imersed in the story when you need to make sense of each word. Not being good in english don't mean it dispense you of editing your story. You can even improve your skill if you do it ! !!
Interesting concept, i am happy to read this history ...................................................................................................
Good start I want to see how it adapts to the crew and if I know that with her, personally I would not mind it would be a good way to remember the anime in a different way.