/ Fantasy / On The Other Side: I Quit Being Human
摘要
Layland Kleinhaus (17) suffers from hypogonadism that makes him less "manly" on top of having a girly face. He is bullied because of it, but he always remains strong ... At least, until he can't bear the betrayals and sufferings anymore.
Filled with rage, indignation, and the lust for blood, he decided to end the life of his tormentors along with the bystanders before taking his own life.
Alas, in the middle of his deed, a mysterious being intervenes the act by summoning him and the rest of the bastards he is killing to another world. He curses his bad luck for not being able to fulfill his revenge because of it, but much to his surprise, there is something much better than having his revenge waiting for him.
"Layland... Be a Demon King."
Thus, his journey of becoming the unparalleled Demon King begins.
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Those who know me are already in the know of my "condition"—minor dyslexia. So, if you find any misspell or 'wtf does this even mean' words, I hope you can pardon me from the insult, and notify me instead.
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Disclaimer:
The picture in the cover is originally titled "Final Judgement," which is posted on DeviantArt by CREADFECTUS.
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寫檢討OK so none of the characters in the story can do simple addition in other words 1+1 not only that but the author has said that after chapter 35 there is a huge burst of character development and the MC becomes a lot less annoying and pathetic and stupid That is not true The author uses a self created plot device to simulate character development so the main character is acting like he has improved but on the inside he clearly hasn’t and has even said that he is being forced to act this way by this plot device and while there has been a little character development he still as cowardly and stupid as he was in the beginning and when I say stupid please go back to the beginning of this review where I said that none of the characters in the story can do simple addition meaning none of them can put two and two together to come to simple and obvious conclusions instead they come up with something stupid and then act surprised when they finally figure out the very obvious conclusion that they should have originally reached Anyway the worst part of the story is most definitely the characters but there are other problems like The grammar besides The small but numerous errors the author is very clearly trying way too hard in many instances to have the characters speak a certain way(examples being noble like or eloquent or arrogant or some thing I honestly can’t tell which one they’re going for) trying to have a character speak a certain way with certain words is fine but if you try too hard like the author has in this then those characters just sound stupid or don’t make any sense like they do in this (i’m not saying that they always sound stupid or don’t make sense but they do)
揭示劇透I'll make it very simple so dear author can understand, NO ONE LIKE A FICTIONAL CHARACTER WHO IS A COWARD, STUPID AND ANNOYING. Did you really think that people will sympathise the main character because he is pathetic?
The main character is weak and pathetic, reading this novel makes me angry, as I expected some sort of revelation or change that would lead to him making better more rational decisions, but he never does.
Finished Ch.14 before review I liked the beginning and what lead to the world change but personally I just didn’t like how constantly tortured the MC was. I get bottom most rung and rising to power but he just seems so utterly useless that other than wanting revenge there doesn’t seem to be any reason for him to be chosen as a demon king candidate. There is nothing to make me want to keep reading, nothing to make me be engrossed by the MC and their story, and no promise to more power anytime soon. Besides that’s my opinion clearly you can believe differently but just know that at least for the first 14-15 chapters it’s rough to get through if it gets any better.
揭示劇透No character development whatsoever. Pretty much the author wasting his talent (which he has aplenty). The characters thought processes make me lose faith in humanity. How is your brain developed past everyone else’s, but you are still dumb? The author should have at least thought that far, right? 2.5/10, if everyone thought like him we wouldn’t have developed past the Paleolithic era.
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It’s an amazing novel. I love everything about it, and would recommend 101% to anyone considering reading it. The character development is too tier.
Most irritating story to read. Irritating to core but later it became the core of the story is the worst thing.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The novel started interesting but I have to say that I was a bit disappointed in the demons. I know its my own wishful thinking. I wanted a demon realm that consisted of slaughter and not a warm welcome in the demon castle :(
the writing isn't that good but I'm enjoying the story that brings me to the next problem. there are to many writing errors yet you are costing the same amount of coins hotshot creators on here put so until you fix your writing skills. make the coins per chapter 5 or 4 because it's to much for the quality and output of writing.
Disgusting story, violence and abuse are never funny nor entertaining and should never been written as if they are a good thing.
I love the whole thing, and the updates come often. I catch myself in anticipation of what I’ll read in each new chapter. Too bad I have no more golden tickets to give because I gave them to “The Lord Is Overbearing”.
After chapter 292: This is actually a really good novel. The name of the game is basically character development, maybe Valeria needs some work but we'll prob get that further down the road... Once you get through the horror of the first 40-50 ish chapters you get the continuation of the actual darkness the author wants to convey. I'm loving it, just taking a breather since I'll catch up quickly and I like to binge...
i like it simply cuz main character is not cringey and acts like a real Pearson and above all is a demon who acts like a dam demon not some hero
揭示劇透The story or at least the start is pretty cliche it’s basically arifureta in a nut shell the mc is kinda cringe in my opinion I feel like it focuses too much on this feminine problem rather than actually trying to make a good training arc the teacher is kinda annoying in my opinion she kinda just there for fan service 😅 I did enjoy the part where he killed them but most the stuff after is a little boring overall it’s ok just not really my cup of tea so sorry author but I’m probably gonna drop this.
I really like the story! I didn't see any disadvantages that people describe above (below), at least for me, again I use a special program that corrects spelling and similar errors, the story is very good! I advise you not to read the comments to the paragraphs, there is nothing interesting there except especially "smart" people...
In my mind this Webnovel is a underdog that should be showed more. Why do I say that it well written and the story is fresh. This novel has the idea of where instead the human being justice and right it this time they our the evil and twisted. I enjoy these types of book because we all get tired of the supposed to be hero’ beings goody toe shoes. For example the so called saintess and/or holy maiden is a hoe and not someone who holy in term. The hero is a bully and sleeps with anyone he can get his hands on it feels like. Next about the mc I like how he doesn’t get everything handed to him. Yes, he gets some support but not to the point where he really needs it. The mc is between a great talent/hard worker. The mc is smart and knows how to play the mind game and not like normal mc of the dense and thinks he always right. This story is like “Ankoku Kishi Monogatari” but where the character not wimp in thinking and grows as a character and where they explore the theme that we get the view of demons and not the humans. I honestly wish the writer would bring out more chapter in a day this how good I think it is. I do like how you can tell there will be a harem but not one in where the female character our like watching paint dry. Anyway I do enjoy this series and hope for more fun and I can tell this series is going to be a 1000 plus chapter because how many mysteries and depth the story building there is and after 227 I can tell that it will be epic jounery! Awesome work and keep on typing this epic tale😬
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