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Kage is a young spirited soul who lives on an earth that has completely been altered thanks to a cataclysmic event. Such events led to the creation of what people in this world call OGI a power source 75% of the population has flowing inside their bodies with such power, they can use what scientists call levels one and two but with the world always evolving it's is discovered there's way more to OGI than we thought originally. Scientists have discovered that level three exists and with that discovery, the world which is split into 4 zones has people from all over trying to discover level three whether it's for a good reason or a bad one. Kage and his best friend Unkown with many other individuals like them make it their goal to discover level three and what makes it so special. Threw this adventure they will have fun times, sad times, and traumatic times they will even face enemies who have their plans set on using level three for reasons unimaginable...
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This is the second time a review this book.What I like is that the ML is relatable and the overall action is keeping you on your toes .Great suspense !
A very good story with a engaging plot and a good pace. the situation of kage in academy I give you that excellent job but the descriptions can be improved other then that . it's a very good story
Interesting premise - wondering the direction that the story will go. I really enjoy reading the story. Great job author, just take care on some of your grammar mistakes.
The writing quality is good at first, more description needed, however, the writer has been writing to the point things, which is suitable for this time of novel. more chapters needed.
The novel is pretty good so far, amazing! It has a lot of action and suspense that makes the readers feel excited and nervous, even me. You describe the scenes vividly and creates a lot of tension and drama. The fights are well-written and show the different abilities and strategies of the characters. However: The novel has some grammatical and spelling errors that can distract the readers and affect the flow of the story. You should proofread and edit the chapters before publishing them or use a tool like Grammarly to check for mistakes if you want to... The novel has some inconsistencies and plot holes that can confuse the readers and create logical errors. For example, in chapter 2, Kage says he doesn’t know what level three is, but in chapter 3, he says he knows it’s a rumor. In chapter 4, Kage says he doesn’t know how to use his OGI, but in chapter 5, he uses it without any explanation. In chapter 6, Kage says he doesn’t know who Unknown is, but in chapter 7, he calls him his best friend. You should keep track of the details and events of the story and make sure they are consistent and coherent. (I'm not a pro or anything, just some advice.) But Overall, still good! The novel is an enjoyable and entertaining read that has a lot of strengths and possibilities. You have a creative imagination and a good sense of humor. The novel can appeal to fans of sci-fi and fantasy genres who like action-packed.
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I'm thoroughly enjoying this book and hope it keeps updating and being just as enjoyable in the future. it was a bit rough at the start but as the story has continued you can see where the author is improving and slowing getting better at writing
I think that the prologue part is totally not needed right now. The way I see it, it can be very eye opening if the prologue part can be used further in the story. otherwise, it's a good book. But I strongly insist that you improve on vocabulary expressions and make the scenes the characters more descriptive.
Wow an amazing work! I loved it a lot. With more updates, this sure will be a blast! Keep updating and you will surely find success. Good luck!
I'd say it's a nice story, but it could use some work. There are a lot of grammatical errors, but aside from that, the story is well put together, and I really appreciate the effort you put into it. Good luck and wising you the best👍🏻
So here's my review! Strengths: - Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy. - Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked. - Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement. - Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue. - Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story. Areas for improvement: - Abrupt transitions between scenes. - Pacing issues in certain areas. - Dialogue could be improved for better engagement. Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
This is a very great book, I love how direct the author is and after reading the first two chapters, I feel a longing to read more. May this book continue to grow popular!
Intriguing read, loved thing about it and honestly keeps me wanting more. Awesome story.
Really like the concept of exploring a new power level, as it adds more suspense and uncertainty as compared to a run of the mill power up story. Needs more chapters!
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I enjoy the pace at which the story is going. The novel is intriguing and full of suspense which makes you want to read the next chapter. The author is really talented. Can't wait for the author to release the next chapter Good job author 👍
good story and great plot, I like how you did the characters in the first few chapters! keep it up!
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more. May this book's popularity rise in the future! The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character. I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more. May this book's popularity rise in the future!