/ Anime & Comics / Obito’s Redemption Story (Naruto Time Travel Fanfiction)
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Obito has a chance: a chance to redeem his acts and travel back to the past to fix them. Through incredible struggle and hardship can the broken Uchiha fix the world and himself?
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Fanfic has a high potential. I just hope it wont be dropped or H. WQ is good, no grammar mistakes and its easy to understand. The updates is 5 because its pretty new. Story Development is good. Character Design is amazing, they feel real. World Background is Good. Hope Rin wont die tho, i mean idc if she becomes a fl but would be sad that he cant save her a second time. Anyway keep it up and ill be sending stones when i get some
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Nothing suits the fanfic more than 5☆ :D Also this stuff is amazing I would throw away all the other things in my library for this.. ^^^^^^ Spam: (๑•̀ㅂ•́)ﾉ➹♡ ξ( ✿＞◡❛)
Ik what I’m doing but I can’t help it. 😁😁 5 STARS BABY!![img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=recommend]
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First 7 chapter are 🔥🔥🔥 Obito is my favorite character and I was looking for this type of novel wow Hope u make more chapter. It has great potential.✌️✌️
doing this review the most current chapter is 5 and so far amazing can't wait for the future chapters the writing obviously 5 out of 5 and the writer get a 5 in my view because I find it hard to find ff like this one and that's it for now.
Love this fanfic!!! There are very few Obito redemption/time-travel fics... I hope you finish it. I'm definitely a fan!!
This story is amazing and there really aren't many fanfics about this part of the timeline so honestly there's nothing Critical I can say to this~
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Good fic Im Happy that i found an óbito time travel fic[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
interesting story. please dont drop it:) [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Un seul mot "j'adore". Merci pour cette histoire passionnante. J'aime beaucoup la construction de l'intrigue. Hâte de lire comment obito va se procurer la ligné senju. j'espère qu'il y aura bientôt une suite.
Enfin une histoire de voyage dans le temps qui traite le problème comme il devrait être. C'est-a-dire tient compte de la personnalité des personnages et fait évoluer l'histoire en fonction de celle-ci
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