摘要
Cute, fluffy, boy love story.
Afira started playing his first ever VRAI game and things turned out different than he expected...
An innocent noob's growing confusion over the friendly actions of the AI in the game he plays.
So what if he spent a bit longer than most in the starter town.
So what if he did every NPC quest.
How did it turn out like this?
Updates sporadically depending on inspiration.
The story belongs to me. The cover image is not mine.
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
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- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
The author as a strong, direct writing style. The hero is likeable and his potential role helping NPCs is interesting. At chapter 14 some inconsistencies seem to be popping up and the momentum is slowing. I guess balancing the romance and the larger story about the NPCs is tricky.
'Boy love' is all I need to know about your story. To me, BL(sh*t) = disgusting garbage, potential suicide material. You are not right in the head writing and reading this.
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I don't think there are enough boy love stories on this site. So I'm adding one! I like the story, maybe you will too. This is bl, MxM, danmei, slash so be warned. I don't plan on explicit *** scenes though. But the guys date and kiss and what not. If you don't like that please don't read. Thanks!