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Peter had thought that he would die that day, yet he lives now, with such powers he had never thought of even in his dreams. He admired a Spider, tried to be a Lizard but now he faces the world as a Dragon.
Witness Peter Parker in a completely different form in his journey throughout the multiverse of Marvel.
This is a Marvel fanfiction with elements from various other fictions.
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Shameless Author's review. This is my first story I am writing seriously. As such, I ask all of my readers to give it a try. This story will show you Peter Parker in a completely different form which you have never seen before. Hope you like it!
Interesting start, but while peter has the instincts of his second form he still feels a bit of pushover. Apologising for things that arent his fault, I find it a bit hard to pinpoint my issue with him atm but it just rubs me wrong the way he acts with the abilities he has. I am not saying he should go cavemen or cultivator young master but a difference should be there compared to unpowered peter. Combine that with the fact that you are currently going through the Kamartaj arc and the Ancient One is surprised and somehow doesn't know about Jean, I find that to be weird because it doesnt fit with her.
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i am sorry but most of the time while reading the story it feels like he is only thinking like an idiot, getting pushed around while having those powers and have no change of mind after being a dragon, it feels like mc is just a pet for everyone to talk about his looks only, no real contribution to the story
It's a good story but he like many others, he joins some organization (shield, x-men, whatever). Does no one say no anymore? I will probably come back to the story eventually, but just once I would like someone to say no and then go on a rampage when they push it. Anyway, enjoy.
it's good but I need more chapters to know what is going on . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It has a lot of potential, but it is very painful to read, the dialogues don't seem natural and expository, not to mention that it seems to treat the reader like an idiot for always repeating information.
Has so much potential, but the way that you write makes me feel braindead, you explain what obviously just happened. Only reason I'm not dissing it too bad is because it's a good plot, which is the sad reality of most fics. Good plot, bad writing.
poderia ter sido uma boa novel. Mas, como muitas boas ideias por aí, sofreu de uma péssima execução. possuindo um protagonista completamente juvenil, que sai falando dos segredos e sociedades secretas aos sete ventos, claro, além das decisões tomadas sem noção nenhuma... Bem, desejo boa sorte para o autor e que contanto que tenha leitores, continue com seu trabalho e seu público alvo.
The story is really good .great character development / World design as well as something new I’ve never thought about happening to Peter Parker. However, there is this one major question that I’ve been wondering with since the beginning of this book and I’m going to stick to it until it’s answered. What is his x gene it mutated then went dormant and has never reappeared since then.
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when does the training ark end my guy I'm to pull a curt Cobain its been 20 chapter
The best thing I've read about the Marvel universe. I hope you won't give up this job. The plot is enticing, the story is perfectly worked out, the characters seem alive, and the expectation of new chapters is painful. From what confused me, it's what you plan to do with the work, adding elements from different franchises besides the Marvel universe.
The story is interesting, but the writing style itself is very annoying, it's emotionless, you kind of read, but have no desire to continue, the main character is just a kid with OP powers. Everyone around him is spinning like they're bees and he's honey))
Es una historia corta y rápida de un Peter Parker que obtuvo los poderes de albion el dragon blanco o más conocido como dragon de la frontera Es una historia interesante se desarrolla bien pero en serio es como leer una novela web contaste de esas japonesas
The story is very good, the only bad thing is that the chapters are very short in my opinion.
I enjoy your book very much I love how you went outside box in your writing so please keep writing
I think the only problem is that MC has dragon genes but is still the same Peter.There is little to no character development. MC accepts everything and looks like a system slave.It's still the same nonsense that with great power comes great responsibility, spiders in all multiverses have already lost their loved ones because of this saying.