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A former mercenary dies and gets reincarnated in the world of Bleach, vested with tremendous psychic powers. No plot knowledge. No harem.
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This time I hope we have actual plot instead of 100 chapters mainly consisting of skirt chasing. Don't do Harem please.. No flirting and hanging out with females 90% of the time. Just be a dude this time. Don't waist your potential man please 🙏🏾...
thought this was gonna be a mob psycho fanfic bleach is cool too tho im rating this high since there aren't a lot of chaps ill come back and delete this and make a more accurate one peace
This novel is really well written. The author fixed some of Bleach's biggest problems, namely its shaky world-building and its numerous plot holes. However, it seems like something important is missing. This novel seems to be written in a very logical way, which has its upsides but sadly may as well be its biggest weakness as it takes away the zaniness away which is a big part of Bleach and also a big reason why many fans love it. Really seems like the author is not really good at being zany and it really shows at times. The plot unfolds in a very logical way but that also makes it much more boring than it could have been. Not only does the story suffer from it but also the comedy, as the jokes were rarely able to land. I would really recommend the author to be more spontaneous and not be too obsessed with logic. Please remember dear author, the logical way isn't automatically the right way. I hope my review was helpful
It's good, but the only thing I don't really like is the MC's way of talking and attitude, It annoyed me a lot reading his interactions, I dropped, but my problem is only specific to a few people, everything else is good.
I just read the synopsis and I really like the idea. *Though I would have liked it more if it was a harem, sigh~"
Well this is just your typical "harem" novel with a Bleach background. We have a lot characters in Bleach but MC only getting close and talking to a female one. And like others "harem" novel of course every female want to f**k with MC. So this is just your typical "harem" novel with Bleach characters name.
Fifst off its well written like all of Ein’s stuff. Also the plot starts out great. MC has powers that are OP but not stupidly so. He doesnt have a goal beyond having a relaxed life but there are hints off that changing as he gets caught up in the plot. It seems like he is going to have character growth to determine a worthy goal. Also his relationship with yoruichi is developed well and they seem to have a good chemistry that was slowly and well built. Then suddenly he almost randomly chooses to get with rukia. Out of almost nowhere he sleeps with her and decides that she is a less risky option than getting entangled with yoruichi. It seemed odd but honestly if thats the direction ein wants to go thats fine its his story. As long as there is no harem which devolves into either weird introspection or stilted middle school philosophy about self worth which some of eins stuff drowns in. The story is good and mc is really cool and likeable. But after the rukia rescue arc mc ends up getting coerced by rukia to sleep with at least fifteen girls. Commence the bombardment of lemons and lemons and more lemons. MC now seems to just reluctantly bang every female character who falls for him just because he is so handsome and strong. Then bankai can be achieved by mc banging the zanpakto spirit of his women. Though he has at this point five women he claims its not a harem since he bangs them reluctantly for rukia. Then it devolves into the same harem nonsense where every chap is about him and his girls only interrupted by brief plot progression or action. Honestly it started off so well if ein can get back to the actual story and not focus so much on lemons it would be a home run story. Im not saying no lemons but lemons to this frequency leave me just skimming them until it gets back to the plot. Its at the point wheee the story itself is hard to find among the lemons. I was really excited to see ein back on his A game in the first 40-50 chaps. SO yeah everything five stars and story at 1 for now since it really went off the rails. But in my opinion it has the foundation with a likeable mc and good powers couples with some reasonable limits that if in the future the lemons decrease it would be 3-4 on the story.
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it's ok but there is too much lemon rather than a enjoying story so if you like lemon and a ok story it's for you
I really enjoyed this story. It has an interesting premise, good writing, good? characters. However, this ‘no harem’ stuff is complete cap. This is definitely a harem. Polygamy is essentially what’s happening, and besides maybe one girl I got no clue why they all like him. It seems like the main character will continue this harem route, and I’m fine with that. Just no false advertising.
great story so far, writing quality is pretty great l. only bad thing on my part is that I found the mc to be pretty unlikable, but it does speak wonders for the quality of the story if I'm still willing to read on even if I dislike the mc.
let's see how long this last before getting dropped like the rest. I predict at chapter 220 it will happen.
Mdr l'auteur veux pas de harem mais le MC baise tout ce qui bouge Et en plus il dit qu'il abandonné yoruichi si elle part avec urahara mais il il baise avec n'importe qui mais c bon ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The man who made me lower my interest on harem , Einlion! Let's see if you stick on what you say about 'no harem'. As someone who follows your skirt from behind, I sincerely doubt it. Einlion is a great Author but just loves harem so much. For the love every skirts that you tried to peek below your screen, please give us a story with no harem. Much love ENL!💜
I don't really find anything wrong with this, other than the main character and he is the reason i've dropped, and let me explain he has no personality beyond being calculating, quick on his feet, or with his quick retorts, he has no personality beyond these traits and he is an extremely unlikable person, it's like watching a cardboard box saunter around real humans like in those metal gear games.
I'm hoping for you author, but in the end it's heartbreak again. do not forget to add this tag so as not to deceive anyone's expectations. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Ok here goes. It is another solid Fanfic by the Author and is a great read for people who enjoyed the author's other works. Solid world, Tsundere MC, OP powers, Harem?, Nice progression. Basically a solid 4/5 story. Give it a try. Keep up the good work author. For me personally, I do not prefer the Character (mainly love interest) driven story but rather a plot driven, this doesn't mean the story is weak, it is just not for me. I am not a big fan of the mc just collecting girls without any big interaction between them. Also unlike what the tags may define, this story is a deceptive harem, the MC is in a polygamous relationship with women, while being committed to one(Dunno how that works, find the novel to figure it out). But otherwise the story is solid.
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I do hope you follow on that "No Harem".