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章節 24: Chapter Twenty four

First date

I better find your love

Jakes said "here we are."

Laura said "are we going to ride those bicycles, we just talk about this... I'm so impress babe."

Jakes said "we are going to ride this bicycles to where the surprise is."

Laura said "exciting, I can't believe you did this."

Jakes said "I'm happy, that you like this."

Laura said "I don't recognize this number, let me switch it off and enjoy our date night. "

Jakes said "those insurance people are annoying, enough about them."

They rode those bicycles until they arrived where the surprise was.

Jakes said "need you to close your eyes, hold my hand you will be fine."

Laura said "let's do this."

Jakes said "will have to walk just a little. "

Laura said "I hear the sound of cars, are we crossing the streets."

Jakes said "yes, babe keep your eyes close almost there and you can now open them."

Laura said "we are at the cinema, wow babe."

Jakes said "yes, your excuses for not coming here doesn't make sense, so I figured you didn't want to watch movies alone."

Laura said "just the two of us, oh my red roses everywhere, how did you do this babe?"

Jakes said "I'm a man full of surprises getting things done sit down and will watch movies, they will serve us food, anything you want."

Laura said "can I please have burger and chips, with orange juice for now and later ribs."

Jakes said "wow, maybe we should have gone to a restaurant, I'm kidding."

Laura said "love this, thank you. "

Jakes said "I will do anything to have you smile like that always."

Laura said "I am a lucky girl in the world right now."

Jakes said "I'm the lucky one and so bless to have you in my life."

*Still could not get hold of Laura*

Eric's Father said "voicemails, where could she be, you young people are irresponsible her father is dying she is out there partying."

Eric said "she is not like that, only if I had jakes numbers."

The nurse said "Mr Thompson he is asking for you. "

Eric's Father said "that's that mean he is now fine."

The nurse said "I can't tell you that."

Laura's father said "I need you to look after Laura, tell her I'm...sorry."

Eric's Father said "you will tell her when she gets here, stay awake."

Laura's father said "I need....her to forgive.....me."

Eric's Father said "nurse."

The nurse and the doctor got in.

"His heart has stopped and please get Mr Thompson out of here" says the doctor

Eric said "This waiting is killing me."

Eric's Father said "let's hope the doctor comes with good news."

The doctor said "I'm afraid…"

Eric said "don't tell me he is"

"I'm afraid" words no patient's want to hear.

Eric's Father said "Eric let the doctor finish."

The doctor said "we tried all we could but we couldn't save him. "

*while Laura was having a best night of her life.*

Laura said "this was the best night of my life, it scares me to say this."

Jakes said "what is it?"

Laura said "I love you Jakes there it is, promise me you won't break my heart."

Jakes said "I love you, I won't. "

*they got back to the mansion*

The helper said "you two are so happy, smiles and laughter what is going on?"

Jakes said "we are just in love."

The helper said "I see, your father woke me, he said he couldn't reach you was worried."

Jakes said "I switch it off to enjoy my date night, go to bed Aunt Dora, I will call him."

Laura said "I have hundreds of messages."

Jakes said "from whom?"

Laura said "same number that I couldn't recognize, it says I need to go to grace hospital, my father is sick."

Jakes said "call that number."

Laura did and got bad news.

Laura said "my father died, and I did not bother to answer the calls Jakes."

Jakes said "come here I got you babe."

He hold her, she cried.

Jakes said "drink this it will calm you down, I'm sorry babe. "

He carried her to the guestroom and she was in her bed. Still crying and Jakes was comforting her. She ended up falling asleep and Jakes fall asleep while sitting next to her.


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