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Past present future, this book comes from my wild era.
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Mc saves a bunch of kids somehow gets karma above a gos becomes the one and only op says he misses his wife after 2 secs forgets his wife his system says make harem he says naw only need one wife then author says he will make a harem from 7 to 14 women Mcs body is a classic fuc boy body that men and woman want to r@pe Mcs personality is insane beta fuc boy Mcs thought process... limited So if you want another run of the mill novel about a op fuc boy treating woman badly and abuseing his power This is the novel you want If you want a story with plot and depth... not the novel for you 0/5 stars
truly boring just skimmed through everything in under 10 minutes hoping for some improvements but found the content wanting. this is not how to write an entertaining OP character...
why these authors are so fixated on these kind of characters????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hands down what I think is possibly the worst thing because yes it's a thing ever created. What were you thinking when you wrote this book, "Oh it's going to be the best book ever and everyone is going to love it." Well I'm sorry we can't support your 8 year old fantasies. Maybe you should just stop writing no one and I mean no one would miss you. In fact you should delete your account because your just that bad you are a plague on webnovels greatness like many others. So I would appreciate it if you just read this and deleted webnovel right after **** just find a way to ban your self after dropping this story. Matter o fact you can not just drop it but you yourself write a chapter how bad you think this story is how you are ashamed of yourself for writing this and that you are dropping it. How you wrote a stupid dumb OP mc that has the worst personality ever and on top of that terrible grammar again I'm going to say this one more time drop the story the find a way to ban yourself.
Bad...Haaaa I shouldn't have raised my expectation I should realize it bad so badddddd Why is it so bad don't know don't wanna explain it just bad and boring I mean really boring...So boring
You Shitty Author dont push it at 15 at most 8-9 chapters per week so we can get chapter when you got sick because of somthing or when theres emergency do the time setting post for the time when you will have to leave for future problems
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This novel is really good, I hope that you would upload more often the novels and keep what you are doing, because you are doing great and I hope for the best in your new novel.
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So he's told he can turn a planet to dust with 0.0000000001 of his power... so he gets 4 of the strongest bloodlines and every skill possible... I think saitama is a little behind this guy. What does he plan to do with so much strenth that he could probably destroy the universe with one punch?
Please upload more often ,,. And make harem of boa Hancock ,erza,Lisa ,ATG harem ,erina nakiri,and Alice nakiri ,rindo kobayshi ,and rias gremory ,akeno ,grafyia lucifuge , velena NTR,great red ,ophis ***** form,
Pls more pls more more moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar moooooaaaaaaaaaar plssssssssssssssssssss Sex is fun you must have it **** this ****. I know **** bitches and sluts everywhere
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hi author can you please start to wrote this novel again. I like it very much bcoz it is an interesting novel. first please improve a little bit of grammar . I hope to tread this novel again some day after you update it.
Just this. I hate MC personality. I hate MC personality. I hate MC personality. I dislike the Plot because theres basically nothing. Just bunch of worlds where he can give the original MC powers and then leave just that