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摘要
What would you do if you woke up in a forest with no memories?
Would you cower in fear, or explore the strange new world?
Join Vyrena on her journey through Gaeia as she tries to figure out her mysterious past! With the voice in her head named Dotty, she will make friends, enemies, gain new powers and become the greatest warrior she could ever be!
Will she find out who she was before? What will the new world bring? Join her journey and find out! Will she find a dash of romance along the way? She just might!
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"Where am I?" Vyrena asked herself.
The girl tried to move her body, but all of her muscles and bones ached. Her throat was as dry as the desert, she needed water. In the near distance, Vyrena could hear the sound of moving water. Gathering all of her strength, she crawled inch by inch towards the water source.
Upon reaching the riverbank, she quenched her thirst greedily. It tasted clear and refreshing, a good sign. She could feel the dirt and grime that covered her entire body. Unable to bear it anymore, Vyrena dunked herself into the water.
The cool refreshing feel of the river water jolted her senses. As she emerged from the water, she could finally open her eyes and take in her surroundings.
-How did I end up here?- she thought to herself.
She tried to remember what she could. Memories flashed through her mind.
- I died -
The realisation shocked her to the core. Her eyes were wide open. Recalling the details made her head spin.
She recalled drinking a substance and laying down in her bed. A familiar hand held onto hers, his words echoed in her mind.
-I'm here for you. I'm here for you.-
But as soon as that memory faded, new memories from the host body bombarded her. When the recollection of memories was complete, a voice popped up in her mind.
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I hope you enjoy the story! If you love it or maybe not, give me some feedback in the comments or in a review! All feedback will be greatly appreciated~
As of 20th June 2021, is completed, thank you for everyones' support. I will likely write a sequel in the future.
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(Currently at chapter 38) Full five star review ~ Their is nothing to complain about. Interesting story with much potential. Plot development is their, neither too slow or too fast. The world is described in much detail. Characters aren't shallow. What else is their to say? It's a good story and probably worth your time. I strongly recommend this story to all people who love good fantasy.
This is truly an amazing story I just started reading this this morning and it's 5 or so hours later and am finished with the recent update. I want to thank the author for making such a good novel and to keep up the great work. :)
As of ch 20 Ive read a lot of system stories. And the first thing i noticed is that the novel is very face paced. But it lacks a lot, it lacks depth in characters the main female. The fl in my opinion does have any charismatic quality yet, to grab my attention to fall deep in love with her and the novel early on. This novel lacks early world building. Even if it has magic they just brush paced the very basic of the basic to continue the flow of chapters but not the whole (at least no yet). The characters introduced are background characters and tying in to being faced paced the fl build connections to these background charcters very quick. Like it feels forced not seemless like i see in other novels. I.m.o i rate the novel maybe a 2.5/5. Its on the weaker side to reincarnation/system genre. So take it with grain of salt.
I really don't understand what is going on with this novel, I see plenty of hype.. but the tags seem way off. She gets a system, abilities and gear right off the bat but then doesn't explore them?! She very rarely used the system and instead of doing anything of note she finds menial labor and settles down in a town!? How is this action and adventure, let alone system... And to be clear, I would be fine with any of this if we understood the characters motivations. The only time we do, is when we hear her say she doesn't want to know more about her dagger, wanting to understand it herself... which she then doesn't do.
This book is amazing, currently at all available chapters. Even after 130 chapters I find myself eagerly awaiting the release of the next chapter. Hidden within the words of the pages is a complex world that explores human and non human nature, takes you in the air and across the wide world. A little bit of luck, and sometimes a lack thereof, this novel keeps a person guessing. Coupled with an author that takes time to respond to comments and tries to engage author-reader interactions you feel connected to the very source of the crwative process. WARNING this book id a ripping good page turner, so be prepared for the binge reading! ❤
Give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go, give it a go,
Here's a brief summary of the first few chapters😁... "I GOT HOOKED, and there's no question about it!!".... It's a novel that anyone would want to read all through the end, in all honesty beyond any reasonable doubt. Author-sama, I have one request... To continue writing not a good read, but one of the " BEST READS" that anyone would have a great time of reading fulfillment! We're with you in your writing endeavors😁 God bless!! We will be silently waiting for the upcoming updates😄
(Chapter 31 review) Hey! Not a writer or an editor.. be forewarned just like to read! Nothing to complain about writing quality wise. Little to no grammar errors. Flows smoothly and if there are any errors i glossed over them. In this novel we find ourselves following a young women by the name of Veronica black fire, who was thrust into someone’s else’s body w/o her memories after dying in her old world. She has a system that acts more like a guide for now and the world is a magic world. Unsure about the power scale or how the magic works really. Main gripes the main character really just casually does things that should not be glossed over. Like she would casually use magic for her first time or eat raw flesh like it was lighting a match and drinking a cup of water. We don’t know her thought while she is doing this and really lacks depths, needs further details to keep the story less jarring. Why did she use magic?! how ?! When did she learn ?
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As a reader it felt like I was on a backseat, watching Vy, it is a very good novel for me to read. Usually I leave novels in chunks so I can read them over the course of a few days but I ended up reading the whole thing in one day, I kinda got sucked into it. I can't think of any problems, maybe just try to fit in a little bit more world-building so we know more about the place? But I'm still enjoying it nonetheless. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the subsequent chapters :) pssst, I like how badass Vy can be...
Never thought that it would be an interesting story! At first, to be frank I really had difficulty remembering the names, but as chapters moved by i hit used to it. Where am I seemed a little clitch at first impress but had a different plot in the inside. Three gifts... And other chapters were also interesting, hope this author continues the story instead of abandoning it. And I don't found any fault with plots till now at 20+ chapters.
(Chapter 10) so far it does not seem that bad, then again nothing really happened so far, but the grammar and the like seem fine Hdhdhdhdhdjdhjdjjddjdjdjdjjdjshebebebdbhd
awesome novel. Keep it up but I've a few questions.... 1st, how old are they especially vy and ly, el is probably 3 or 5 2nd king and princess are otherworlders, I'm guessing being one is possibly somewhat rare but not unheard of, but what are the chances of bother father and daughter being both otherworlders and I need more information altogether. There are some questions answered along the way, but many more are unanswered also, where are the baby vipers, and what are their names?
This story is one of the most interesting that I've ever read on here! I love how the MC has so much power and is so smart about how to use it! Good work! I can't wait to read more!
I’m glad to feast both my eyes and mind on this amazing original webnovel. The world and characters will grow onto you. Coupled with the good writing, you will be in for a rollercoaster ride with the fellow protagonists! Thankful to author-sama for completing this. If its a novel in hardcopy format, I wouldnt mind purchasing it 👍 Hope that more webnovel readers could stumble upon this gem soon! I shall now head over to author-sama’s new novel :D Byebye~
I admit to liking transmigration novels a lot as well as fantasy and romance stories. As such, I tend to read the synopsis, and add them to my library to determine whether I should keep or remove. With this novel, for some strange reason is not holding my interest. In that I'm reading but I'm not getting into the FL who I'm sure is written as an extraordinary person. The world seems okay and so far the people but as stated my interest is not invested in the story in terms of emotions. I do not feel them just an okay vibe which is not good for the library as it means a short stay. This of course is no fault of the author per se its just that a reader's taste and interest differs. I am sure the novel is fine for others and even great for some but for me though its early yet, at this state its not going to be in my library for long. Take care author.
I’m going to write another review about this novel! To all people who are deciding whether to read this novel or not, you should read it! This novel, I rate it 10/10! This novel is interesting, unique, and fun to read! You won’t regret reading this! :D
I’ve just started reading this novel and I have to say, this novel is awesome! Good work author! :)
I’ve just started reading this, and it’s great!!! I love novels where the MC is admired and gets powerful as the story progresses and seeing Vy being admired makes me happy and proud for some reason 😅😅😅😅😭😭😭 💖🧡❣️❣️💜💞💓💜❤️💞💕💓💓💗💗💓💕🖤💜💛🧡❣️💖💝💝💚💖❣️🧡💓💓💗💚💙❤️❣️❤️❣️❤️💘❣️💕💚💞💞💙💞💞💙💕❤️💖💝💞💜💞💜💞🧡💕💕💛💛🖤💜💜💛💜💕💛
Hi Everyone! It's Author san here, finally ready to give her shameless review! This is the first-ever novel I have published here on Webnovel so I hope you all are enjoying it so far! <New World New Life> is the story of a woman's adventure through this fantasy world! She will face plenty of obstacles, meet both friend and foe. She may or may not meet the person she had been searching for, you'll have to read to find out! Writing Quality: I try to edit as much as I can before I upload, although I will admit that more can be done! I am open to feedback, so please let me know if you have any! Stability of Updates: I am aiming to maintain 1 chapter a day at 11.00 am (GMT +8) for as long as this novel goes~ Cross my fingers I might be able to get an extra chapter out here and there! Character Design: There will be tons and tons of characters that come through the story, only a selected few would recur throughout. I try and make them unique from one another so that they don't all feel the same. World Background: This World (maybe worlds?) is vast and contains multiple continents. Do not be surprised to see inspiration from real-world places too! If you have any questions and comments, please feel free to leave them here too! I would love to read them and answer them too! Have an awesome day! <Updated as of 15th March 2020>