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After several events Rayner decides to go to another world to live a more exciting life
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The grammar is a mess, you rated your own novel with 10 accounts, cover art is probaly not copyright free but not even yours, srsly at this point i cant help but think youre a child, probaly. I can see you atleast tried, but ....
Just ignore this review for the following reason: I saw that there are only 9 reviews at the moment, that's why I write this review to make it 10.
Just a review nothing suspicious and nothing bad happening, and yeah I just want to review cuz the reviews are 19 so after this it will be 20.
i fell in love with that armor,*I WANT IT********************************************************************Darn the 140 characters, so annoying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters
DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters View More
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Great 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I just like the novel so i'll rate it 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😈
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- V
Got nothing to write......................I like it..l like it.....................................'................................................................................................🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
..............................................................................................................................I JUST WANTED TO RUIN THE PEFECT NUMBER OF REVIEWS {18}
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Beautiful keep up the great work Dhdievfor fod dir id rifdhxifkdodndbdificucuchcucuc chcchfjfbdbrickcufufufhdhdhdhdhdhfichfifbfobfifbfifbdidbidid
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DANG YOUR NOVEL COVER LOOK SUPER COOOOL!!!!!!! You better make him have a armor like that. HE HE............ Dang it i have it when it say 140 characters