/ Urban / Netori System [Original]
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https://www.patreon.com/ghostybones
[WARNING EXTREME R-18 SEX]
In a modern world full of powerful beings a System is given to every human when they are born. Each System is different based on the System's special abilities and title. The origin of these Systems is unknown and remains a mystery.
One high school boy named Jon is betrayed by his closest friend and is outcasted from this world. His life soon changes when he gains a new power that takes everything from everyone! He will get his revenge!
In this world, only the strong stand above in their own hierarchy and corruption. Even mythical and legendary beings exist in this world hidden in secrecy. Jon will conquer every beauty in this world no matter what!
>[Netori System activated!]Warning
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Seems a bit like NTR Crush but in my way like way i want it to be i expect great things from this novel and hope it does not becomes a mess like NTR Crush which even after two volumes has fucking netorare still in it i hope the author does it differently in this novel
This story is basically ' unordinary ' with sex.ual content. instead of powers he uses system. But eyes still glow when they use power.. And also there is royals in school who decides rules. main character is coincidentally jon (john) hehe he can also copy other powers? Hmmm. Maybe the only difference is se.xual content.... But I love this story more than Unordinary because I am a fan of R-18.
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The novel isn't bad at all but seriously why do have over 30 chapters saying go to your patreon now I'm not saying you shouldn't advertise but having 5+ in a row is very obnoxious
It's a good story and written pretty well. The problem is the author plusses up his chapter count with advertising and trying to solicit. This alone is what makes me give it a poor review.
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Its really good. I'm 100% like the great novel. Unfortunately i can't continue to the next chapter. even though i like to pay so that ii an continue, to bad I don't have money hehehe. thank you for this amazing novel.
As an hentai novel it is fantastic, there isn't any restray on the MC lust. The MC is like fallen man that after being betrayed decide to destroy and change the entire world and system. His skills are too cheating and the story has a lot of hole, but the hentai part keep evrything intersting. The best thing is that a lot of the characters of the story come from a lot of anime and you see couples in those anime being broken, moreover thanks to this you can immagine the aspect of the character better. The real problem is that of these nearly 100 chapters at least 20 are him sponsoring himself on patreon or asking powerstone. I would at max prefer him making the chapters here locked.
Read less than 20 chapters so far can't fully review the systems are interesting just somth about the story feels off, like random powers show up that we didn't know he had and he somehow sees his sister memories confusing, so far it's average
I don't mind the names and concepts from other novels because there is an original plot and all but the main issue which makes this novel almost unreadable is the constant plot holes in the story. like saying a skill does one thing and has limits to the mc having basically no limits and going back on everything he says or figures out about his system. the powers get ****ed up and change almost every chapter. it's so painful because I would love if the novel just stayed to one thing or another. he could be super op or have an actual growth system IDC it's just annoying when the limits to his power fluctuates depending on how the author wants to develop the plot but there is no explanation to why he gets stronger or his powers have no limits anymore and the points he has go up or down randomly without any reason to be explained. it's just to frustrating and confusing to keep up.
I do enjoy it, although it feels a bit rushed so far. It's very satisfying though, having an MC who is just outrageously OP and just fks everything and everyone. Thks author bb 😘😘😘
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