/ Anime & Comics / NARUTO:YONKO SYSTEM
摘要
What if the 4 emperor of the sea power combine into one.
Ryu is an ordinary teenager, he has a loving mother and father of course he has 2 siblings.
If you can describe Ryu in a one word that is 'Perfect' but Ryu is not a perfect person.
Because he has an unstable mind or mentality.
Sometimes he was so kind that he even try to help some girl being rape at the end he was stab by the rapist.
But sometimes he become psychopath.
His mentality was base on his mood whatever he wants to be a good guy or a crazy guy...
*WARNING*
The Naruto in this fanfic is AU because why not?
Any review auto delete, why? because I wanted to. So don't try leaving some kind of review, whatever it's good or bad imma delete it.
My english is bad but i think it's readable.
Naruto and the One piece is not mine so credits to the owner.
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super good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Not the best, but also very recommendable for readers who are looking for a quick refresher. NO BS just fun reading. It would be great if the author continue this,. Pare, tuloy mo na pabitin ka pa
I don’t remember the last time I read something of this magnitude. You’ve created a masterpiece with this. 💓💓💓💓 You’re a wordsmith! I’ve never even heard of half the words you use, and yet I seem to understand every single one of them! Some people think that writing on computers is easy. But I know how difficult it is to come up with ideas and turn them into meaningful and interesting content. Never give up, bro!❤️
Harika yeni bölümnacil yaz seni tembel yazar_ san.......................................................... acil 4 ay ne yapıyorsun aaaaa 140 karakter yazma kuralına tülüroyim
I liked the idea of this story but it just got horrible as the story progressed, the main character had Big Mom’s template and even when it was at 40 something percent he would still lose to a Jonin. And the reason he would lose was because of battle experience which i honestly find to be nonsense, like seriously he may not have the battle experience but someone with her abilities (Soul Fruit,Haki,monstrous strength and defense) should still win. You should’ve made his template progress slower and therefore you wouldn’t have to nerf him so badly.