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*NO HAREM*
The Mc of this novel has transmigrated to the AU naruto world as the younger brother of Itachi and Sasuke Uchiha. He is neither a pacifist like his brother Itachi nor vengeful like Sasuke. He is cold and calculated about every move he makes and every decision he takes.
In this novel, the mc will be proficient in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu but his true power lies in Kenjutsu and Genjutsu.
Most of the Fan-fics I read completely ignore something as op as Genjutsu which is why the MC will be using it the most.
All the photos used in this fan-fic are not owned by me.
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This novel has many things different from the canon. The grammar is good than many other fan-fics out there and there won't be any harem in this novel
review after chapter 14 ~~ . Perfect way to introduce yami to academy.The fights, the emotions, everything is great. . I'd prefer if he has more friends.... and hanabi too.... . overall 7/10 as there are no grammar mistakes or other emo or power hungry mc... although romance & story development is yet to be seen...
i like this novel by a lot, this obviously has some stupid plot holes but still it is quite good, i like the plot devolpment and pacing and i was surprised to find a some what likable version of sauske despite him being not the mc, and mcxhanabi. that's a big thumbs up from me
hmmm.. the idea is great actually, but the execution is kinda meh, the mc is smart(most of the time) author also forcefully stop the mc from using his devouring ability to make the mc less powerful but still makes him op anyway while being young as 9 years old i find him specially dumb when he killed the village elders and kabuto when he didnt put the corpse in a scroll or something to absorb for later and allowed kimimaro to take kabuto's corpse when he could 1 hit kill kimimaro. i find it dumb and cringe when suddenly yami fought itachi and kisame in front of the 2 sage and the jonins of konoha on chapter 191 when he's clearly aware of the uchiha past. i hope they kill iitachi nd kisame on the following chapters to mess with the novel more but that's less likely to happen. imagine weakened itachi and kisame fighting jiraiya, asuma, kakashi, kurenai, yami that can toy with them and they survive. i felt like i wasted my time reading this and was disappointed with what happened. I don't have enough braincells to read the following chapters to know why the author did it so goodluck to other readers.
I can't take it anymore, 26 chapter and dropped🙃 The story and idea starts out good, but it's turning more and more cringe and cliche. Idk how it gets so much view and good ratings (maybe the author delete the bad ones or the people taste is degrading) First problem, the author sense is bad, all turns out cringe Second problem, I can see how annoying is ino gonna be, and it looks like forced feeling, moreover they're still just a kid, I think the author wouldn't be good at writing romance Third problem, the MC is just too op in short time that I feel like reading 3rd rated chinese fic and much other problem. It's my honest and reasonable review, please don't delete it Author.
It's great until about ch 130ish. The chapters started to become smaller with more filler and more word padding. At around ch150, the story progresses slower than a dead snail. I would say, either read it until you catch up or wait for this to have at least 1k chapters.
Author could you put romance in the tags, I wouldn't have spent 10 seconds deliberating if i should read this... Come on, no harem and romance!
I don't like fics where little kids have reached Kage tier. Really wished you have written your MC to be 7-8 years older. Story would have been much more realistic. That said, the arcs in this fic are quite good. Especially the latest Kiri arc. If the above isn't an issue for you, then it's a good read. 5 star to update stability and story development. Keep up the good work. I'm glad I stuck despite the initial reluctance to read.
The writing is very good, but the fanfic itself leaves much to be desired. The plot is marking time, the characters are ordinary cardboard. In the 70 chapters that I read, not a drop of plot, forces rise endlessly. The author can underestimate his character, preventing him from doing useful actions for him. In one moment he is the smartest existence in the universe, and in another he is an autistic person with down syndrome. I'm done with it. (Google Translate)
Is this worth reading. I have read a few chapters but it's not that good. Does it get better?
MC ability is really good He becomes OP fast but there are no inconsistencies. Smart MC The story is fluid and has merged with the canon smoothly Love interest is our fan favourite 😍 I would suggest if a some foreshadowing is present The story feels linear (which is good sometimes) But some hints of future events would be well appreciated Overall good work Thank you @Author
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Best Naruto fanfic I've read so far. I really like the persistent and constant updates but I only have one problem. Haku from the original series is regarded as a beautiful boy but I'm not sure if this is an AU cos you change the pronouns used, he or she, when referring to Haku sometimes.
This story is amazing and is a must read. The world is perfectly crafted to fit in with cannon. supplementing in places that the anime didn’t. picking up and enhancing aspects of the show that could have been expanded on in the anime like the blood line purge and the Jashin cult. There aren’t plot holes and everything is mentioned for a reason. and fits together seamlessly. Just for Yami to pulling strings we don’t even realize yet and it is amazing. The characters are well crafted in there relationships between each other and Yami and how the subtle changes that his presence has made are thought out and make sense like for example Sasuke being a much happier and friendly person as he isn’t the last uchiha left to face the world and his brother alone. It is a piece of art work and it is such a shame that it hasn’t been updated in a while and i hope the author will pick it back up
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Overall good novel. Only bad points: Author is either chinese or reads too much chinese novels so theres some influence of chinese novels. Like everyone sucking the MCs pp every chance they get and random dialogs during fight scenes. The worst thing about this novel: MC is an edglord and the author too so he dosen’t miss a chance to showcase how incredible the MC is and make everyone suck his pp. If you can ignore these things the novel is a very good read to pass the time and I definitely recommend.
About 200 chaps in and one thing I simply don't understand How tf can a 4 y/o wear weights heavier than Lee's and RUN + keep wearing them all the time. For many it might be a small thing but for me it's a big deal. Hokage agrees that after devouring the Uchiha Jonin, his chakra is chunin level and he is stronger than Sasuke at present (7-8 y/o Sasuke) but he isn't even as strong as an academy graduate Other than that and a few plot holes, the story is decent. I don't complain much while reading fanfics if it ain't too wierd or I'm not too tilted at that moment Grammar/Spelling mistakes: Very Few MC's genin squad: A well-thought team with a purpose (search and destroy squad) with Guy as the sensei which I've rarely read so a good thing for me Pacing: A little slow but workable Love interests: Good ones Overall: Keep Going and I'll keep reading, it's definitely worth reading just ignore a few things at the beginning
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bro when is he gonna use devour again? Its like a waste he still havent devoured sharingan
I hardly write reviews but I'm really enjoying this one. Writing quality was poor in the beginning of the novel, and it felt like the author was unsure of what he wanted to do with the main character and story. 190 chapters later and the writing has vastly improved, though there are the occasional grammatical errors. Story is moving in an interesting direction with a large deviation from canon (which is a good thing). Would recommend.
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