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摘要
A lazy guy reincarnates into Naruto world. What does he do? He waits for the tropes to kick in.
Where are my advantages? Where is my cheat? I don't like to do hard work. I don't wanna. But there is no choice here. I don't wanna die in this dangerous world. it's do or die here.
Story expectations:
1. There will be lots of elements that will be explored in the novel.
2. There will be Newer arcs as the story setting is at least 12-13 years earlier than anime.
3. MC will build his power bit by bit. All of his power will reflect the training he undergoes.
4. Although the Novel name is decided on a whim, Naruto's world will be explored thoroughly
5. The brutality and gore of the shinobi world will be displayed in its full glory.
6. There is a strong focus on personal relationships as well.
Author Intro:
I'm starting my first book for casual writing, and I welcome new ideas from the readers. This is my first novel so I may have some difficulties, but I am committed to improving as I am writing this book.
Thus any feedback that can help enhance the book is highly appreciated.
I am open to any suggestions that can improve the overall quality of my writing.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or its characters (except for the original characters that I will Introduce in the novel)
The cover art is owned by me.
Request:
Please join me on Patreon: patreon.com/Admirers_Quill
Support me with whatever you can. Thanks & please enjoy!.
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the writing quality has increased a lot in second volume and the story is in its course to what I feel a major event. The personality of mc is quite good coming to terms with living as child again is quite evident and he is also quite serious in training himself and is atleast ensuring to encourage others for training too as future is gonna be difficult and many will not survive, the side characters however feels sometimes more mature at their age or banter of stupid things feels like author is trying to go mote mature orphan kid route with them. Though mc is powerless to change anything now it would be great for mc to have enough say or wit to change something from hyuga incendent Or uchiha massacre (like saving certain someone from uchiha massacre by taking a long term mission outside land of fire, etc) It would be great if naruto would be given to same orphanage as where mc is from so it will not raise any alerts for interacting with naruto Or being a mentor figure. this novel has potential to reach wind calamity level of novel and that was what I though after reading the first 10 chapters so that's a lot to say...
Great characters, interesting plot, funny MC. Overall really interesting and great read. WAY TOO SHORT AND FEW CHAPTERS. NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
Hello, Writing a review for my own novel. All I can discuss write now is the story will be bit light hearted in the beginning. Everything will be explained bit by bit and also focus would also be on character interactions. I will also try to explain how chakra actually works in response to different hand signs. thats something I am still working out. But I want to atleast extablish the hand signs rules. Any way, please review and comment if you like the novel and send power stones. If you dont like something, any suggestions or improvement ideas would be highly appreciated. Thanks Have a good day.
It has been a while since I have written the last review... So, I came here to update. This is a pretty good story. In fact, I am supremely baffled that it doesn't seem to get a lot of recognition right now. Yeah, this has some nice potential. If I could, I would drop a hundred Powerstones on this. Daily. I hope that fellow readers at least support this a bit more. Peace.
As 10 chapters have been completed in this novel, I would like to ask the readers to post a review of this novel. Hopefully as a goal to move towards, I will post a 5 Star review. As a new writer, I am always looking to improve the writing quality as well as getting feedback from the readers about the story. It is always helpful if a reader points out a mistake or any improvements that can be made into the story. It is also motivating if a reader asks a question, leave a comment or review for the Novel. Thus, I ask you to please leave reviews and comments.
This novel definately has potential to rival top naruto fanfics but not much can be said about as it is still under 50 chapters but I hope for the best
Author has come back with a banger. Great to see you. I expected the story to gain a more fast pace when I read the title of second volume "Disaster & Aftermath". And it did, Keep it up author.
since this novel is on hiatus for a while, I wanted to leave a review. the novel and its updating stability is on par with the popular ones on this app. I'm not sure why this isn't getting the recognition it deserves.. maybe it still needs a bit more time. but I just wanted to say I honestly enjoyed the plot and the jokes, this novel has a lot of potential! I hope the author's hiatus goes smoothly.
its good not gonna lie bro .but try to make more intresting by including mor jokes and some funny refrence................................................and keep it up author
It's good, and I hope you keep it up. However, I don't get why most writers assume that lying to professional liars is a good thing. You have made it known he ain't a genius or one born with that type of talent. Looking forward to more chapters
Good Writing. For a beginner author you have included quite a few interesting things in your story. I read 5 chapters, But I am planning on reading. Keep it up Author. Good job.
I'm loving the story and the direction it's going in, since the recent chapter (chp 11) its getting a little more serious and jokes have been hilarious soo far