/ Anime & Comics / Naruto, the rebirth of the definitive existence.
摘要
Hayato, a high school student who has trained martial arts since childhood, has reached a level comparable to a superhuman, but keeps a very low and reserved profile, one day fighting criminals to save a classmate, he is shot dead. to the head. Hayato is miraculously reborn as Naruto and receives 10 supreme abilities with which he will become a definitive existence, "The universe does not belong to me, but I will become something more extraordinary".
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I inform you that this week I will start uploading many chapters, before I was focused on my studies and work, but since I already have time I will write again, if you want me to get more chapters please donate any amount to my paypal link in my profile.
Good fan-fic author, I am tired of always seeing the same plot, for that I better repeat the series, however I will give this one a chance. I also hope that it does not put so much filling, that is one of the errors that other fan-fic have🥱🥱🥱
The grammar is nonexistent, no spell check, the words aren't even the correct words and they make no sense. Impossible to comprehend unless you're ignoring most of it or drunk. some facts are incredibly wrong MTL would be better
It is a good fan fic and shows naruto interacting more with his family and friends in this story😁😀👍👍👍👍👍 .................................. ..................
It's really a horrible fanfic, it looks more like a translation of a Chinese fanfic instead of something original. I have to admit, sometimes people just feel like reading something like that with no history or development where the mc just solves everything with op powers instantly. But that doesn't change the fact that the fanfic is terrible.
First, the bad. The grammar sucks and some words are meant to be there, but, with some struggle, it can be read. Now, for those that can read some bad English, the story is quite catchy. Don't get me wrong. It's a book's equivalent to McDonald's, but, sometimes, you need a power fantasy like this. Hopefully the author can get some practice with English so that it could be better.
I would be very grateful if you could support me by donating any amount since I work and am a student, so I don't have much free time to write. I will leave my paypal link in my profile for those who want to help me. Thanks.😉😉