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Red Hair? Check✅
Ridiculous Chakra Reserves ? Check ✅
S̶a̶d̶i̶s̶t̶i̶c̶ T̶e̶n̶d̶e̶n̶c̶i̶e̶s̶ Pranking as Hobby? Check ✅
This is the quirks of the Error in the plot- Sora Uzumaki.
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Warning- The AI is heavy in this one, but no flowery words in every paragraph.
Sora is not directly blood-related to Naruto and is an original character(OC).
Inspired by Naruto: paws and whiskers.
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Author review here... I tried to make this fic funny... yup that's it... Really... I have nothing else left to say... I am typing this due to min-
It‘s confusing sometimes other people call him uzumaki to his face and he either somehow doesn’t realize he’s related to naruto or the author just didn’t write about it and it’s a plot hole for now… also I’m hoping for adamantine sealing chains lol. The story in itself is really funny, interesting and wholesome to read tho, can only recommend!!
This is a great ff with a lighthearted touch, which is quite a nice breath of fresh air compared to the other high quality Naruto fics. Hiruzen, so far, has been portrayed as a good-hearted grandpa and it would a lie to say that I am not happy with that. I am also pleasantly surprised with the writing quality, the comedic tone, the power scaling and overall vibe of the novel. In conclusion, the novel has potential to be one of the greats!!
Lol, There is a review limit of 3 for me... My plans to spam have ended before it even started....,,,,,,,,,,, Try out Part Time Employee in Konoha
Sorry to the author for being a little harsh This story for the people that don’t care about the Canon knowledge and how did usual reality of that show looks like. The MC is very young and not in the Academy yet but somehow sneaks in to the Academy to do a prank and all of a sudden in the class and he’s five years ahead and nobody bats an eye when he is in class That nobody approved that he’s in. Besides Naruto is way more than smart than the canon version of him is. Naruto made an extremely well prepared plan for prank and covered the whole village in Orange paint by using seal scrolls. Naruto is an orphan that has no money. It was never explained that he stole or anything in this fanfiction so how he came about that much money to use for pranks and have cleverness to use seal scrolls is wierd. I think for the people who just look for entertainment and don’t care about Canon knowledge this would be a good fanfiction, but it is unfortunate not for me
****************************************************It's a really wonderful ff which is not really popular now but a hope it's gets popular so things to look out for: -no edgelord MC -no shadow hiruzen(mostly) -no grooming -op but not so op as he can this get killed or captured -no reincarnated, but the mc still has a lot of fun by pranks It's really worth reading and recommended if you enjoy reading something fun and different ****************************************************
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The comedic scenes added with unthinkable twists - This is one of the best fanfics out there based on the storytelling that gets the readers on hooked which untold a great writer who made the story is a genius on making the most exciting adventurous journey in this fictional world of Naruto. All i can say is, “I loved it so much because you made it so fun and intruiging which probably tell that you are so passionate into making this story - you are def GENIUS and hella talented in writing - Has anybody told you that phrase? Anyway, i hope you are doing well!”
The story is great so far and you can tell that the author is having fun writing it. If I had to complain about something it would be the lack of explaining about the system he made and it's ins and outs. Other than that love the story so far and enjoying the update speed sometimes I find myself wishing for more
Overall the story is okay, the humor is average at this point, monotonous in places. The character design of the protagonist is good. There is no plot in the story so far, the usual everyday life. Also creeping suspicion that there will be no at least a share of seriousness, development in the mental plane of the main character and other characters. So read if you have nothing to do, or just to relax your brain from more advanced works/fanfics. Again things can get better as the story progresses.
It's ok. I am reviewing it bit early since it has a lot more chapters now. The story seems to be heavily AI assisted. But no that does not affect the quality of writing. There are some usual overly descriptive aspects or some recurring sentences and scenes likely due to AI influence. But on positive side the language is good and I did not see any grammar or pronoun issues. I have rated the story average on some aspects because repeatedly MC talks about things he should not know at that point of story. Information is mentioned which again should not be present at specific point of story. Then there are some logical gaps which lead to situations that shouldn't be possible like how MC casually sits in a class he is not part of but the teacher knows him. Or how a very poor Naruto can somehow manage to make expensive purchase. That bothers me a bit
The story is interesting so far, and the author seems to be enjoying writing it. The only aspect I see that needs improvement is providing more details about the system. However, the update speed is great and always makes me eager to read more. The work is great and exciting so far, and the author seems to be enjoying working on it. The only criticism I have is the lack of detail about the system used. Other than that, I liked the fast pace of the updates and wish the chapters were longer or more. The story has progressed great so far, and I feel the author is enjoying developing it. However, I think the story needs a more detailed explanation of the system. Other than that, I appreciate the speed of the update and always look forward to reading more.
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Yo, I want to say great story, although I couldn't help but feel like the end of many chapters sounded A.I generated. Can you confirm it's true or not? Sorry if my question is so off, I have been overworking lately using A.I, so I just want to make sure I'm not tripping.
can you post a pic of sora usumaki so I can see it up close here please narrator fanfic writer
Crackfic at it finest. Please continue to 'at least' to be able to prank kaguya 😁
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Guys, I want to declare this before reading, this fic is not crackfic but rather comedy with a huge overtone initially, it has logic, Believe me, the action scenes are decent in my opinion, It gets more interesting later on, and the comedy overtone becomes undertone, so do keep that in mind before skipping this fic.