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Naruto wakes up with the Talent System on the day before Academy Starts. How does this change everything?
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I like the story so far. When system was mentioned I was about to skip it but I'm glad I read it. Good story development and an interesting twist in each paragraph. Keep up the good story and humor.
Don't you dare think about dropping this story F by guy sensei 😔✊ essa merda de 140 caracteres é estúpida.....................................................
This is good so far, and I’ve read some of the authors other works and they’re pretty good too. The spelling and grammar are solid and engaging and from my experience with his/her other stories he either knows the story way to well or does his research, probably both. Keep writing author I promise I’ll be reading till the end.
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I'm going under and this time I fear there's no one to save me This all or nothing really got a way of driving me crazy I need somebody to heal Somebody to know Somebody to have Somebody to hold It's easy to say But it's never the same I guess I kinda liked the way you numbed all the pain Now the day bleeds Into nightfall And you're not here To get me through it all I let my guard down And then you pulled the rug I was getting kinda used to being someone you loved I'm going under and this time I fear there's no one to turn to This all or nothing way of loving got me sleeping without you Now, I need somebody to know Somebody to heal Somebody to have Just to know how it feels It's easy to say but it's never the same I guess I kinda liked the way you helped me escape Now the day bleeds Into nightfall And you're not here To get me through it all I let my guard down And then you pulled the rug I was getting kinda used to being someone you loved And I tend to close my eyes when it hurts sometimes I fall into your arms I'll be safe in your sound 'til I come back around For now the day bleeds Into nightfall And you're not here To get me through it all I let my guard down And then you pulled the rug I was getting kinda used to being someone you loved But now the day bleeds Into nightfall And you're not here To get me through it all I let my guard down And then you pulled the rug I was getting kinda used to being someone you loved I let my guard down And then you pulled the rug I was getting kinda used to being someone you loved
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The system could very well come from nowhere/Empty/Without any being behind it, the system being ordered by someone or planned by something makes me bored. O sistema bem que poderia vir do nada/Vazio/Sem nenhum ser por trás, o sistema ser mandado por alguém ou planejado por algo me deixa entediado.
this story is amazing it needs to continue please update and ill keep sending power stones this is a perfect talent system naruto unlike the other one I read I hope you update soon
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This **** is so good. I hated other naruto fan fics because it is almost always a ***** going in naruto kid body and they don’t know how to act like a kid at all. They make pretty much all adults ediots to make up for it. I like this because you keep naruto’s kid like thinking with a smart system that tries to make him Op and less cringy. That’s why I like this **** so much.
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I like the story so far.naruto in this story is quite reasonable. I just hope that he slowly gets rid of his "will of fire" completely.