/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Talent exchange system
摘要
Yato is an outcast orphan who grow up in Konoha's toxic environment.
Despised and bullied by the villagers, Yato's longing for Naruto's world had long since died down, especially after discovering that he had no ninjutsu talent.
Knowing the future events and the great ninja war that would change the whole world, Yato almost surrendered to despair.
Just as the thoughts of leaving the village and hiding in some corner filled his mind, a sudden ding rang in his mind.
[Talent exchange system bound to the host]
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1. The MC won't be op immediately. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over the years.
2. There will be a lot of killing (not at the start, but once the MC gets stronger.)
3. The story will start slow. Quite a few of the initial chapters will be around training, and academy life, instead of directly becoming a Ninja.
4. MC is a careful person, he won't show his full strength or put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.
What to expect :
1. Smart MC
2. MC manipulates the plot and characters to his advantage
3. Movies arcs and a few original ones.
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Please note that this story was inspired by a Chinese story in mtl with a very bad translation. so, I'm translating and editing a few things, changing the MC choices, adding a few original ark, and giving the MC character growth.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or its characters (except the original characters I create).
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寫檢討
My opinion. Positive points: The story is consistent and maintains an adequate pace. The main character is well constructed and very well detailed in history, personality and appearance. Negatives: In my opinion, the system is off-putting, it is generally used by beginning writers, it is a shame to be included in such a good story. However, you can read it without fear and I guarantee it's good.
W story man dunno if it's a translation or whatnot but great quality. A great premise especially with the downsides of the power he gets from the system.
The MC is Edgelord Supreme. The fic has potential but I couldn't go past chapter 19. 😭
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is this your original or MTL if it's mtl then give me link or original title of this MTL
good just needs to be updated everyday at least once mc is a edgelord like the main character from cote ..................................................................................................................................
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I liked almost everything, I love Naruto fanfic but I don't like it when the protagonist has powers from other worlds..........................
It ok the mc is a edge lord all he does is train and live in the woods ch 1-27 I hope for some character