/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Shinju's Revenge
摘要
His job was to kill his target, and he was fine at his job, but his last job did not go as expected. The moment death came to him, the tree branch he had kept with him for many years began to shine. His body was dead, but his soul?
Actually, the type of branch is Divine Tree. Its goal is to avenge its own kind. It was to kill the Otsutsuki Clan, who used its kind for selfish purposes. It needs help with this goal.
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(I have read until chapter 11) I liked the synopsis, but when I started reading I realized that it is almost the same as the canon (Naruto's behavior has some differences) in places, conversations and situations. what I think makes the story boring.
I came here to read a story about Shinju and not a retelling of the original story..................................................................
the description is clickbait dude, so I'm not going to read anymore sory dude, you should rewrite the description so people don't get confused
Click bait, suddenly naruto have sharingan and idk where or when team asuma come as reinforcement. My mere Mortal brain can't comprehend the language of god like this
Basically click bait its literally a repeat with minor changes of the original story wouldnt read this pretty bad of the author to do that in his description of the story
ughhhhh!!! Mc is to focus on his transformation not his base power!!! He is just like a genin abusing the power of bijuu with no drawback!!! Everytime he fought, he alway using his new transformation or power even if the opponent is a lot weaker than he fought before!!! And everytime he does something even though it might affect the cannon event, it didn't change some event at all!!! Mc didn't even know what the consequences for what he is doing, e.g he kill and took the bijuu in other nation, and the leader of that nation will not question him at all for what happened or what is he upto!!! C'mon man! The other nation might conquered that nation!!! And he also talk to a CONTROLED person, as if the one who controlling that said person will not know at all!!!!
If I'm honest with the author, the novel has a lot of flaws. first, rushed story development. second, too many skips in the story, especially in mc's battles and journeys. Third, I don't know why I feel that your MC is like a typical MC in Chinese novels, seriously.
i will not say what i don't like that i found in this book🤪, read it yourself and you'll find out. im not in a good mood right now while making this review because looks like the books that i interested to read are all dropped 'cause class is back that's why you will find out that i had many comments in every paragraph that i don't like or something is wrong in the chapter. so yeah....
Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
Good novels. I hope more for the author to finish this novel with every interesting story 💥. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I came here to read a story about Shinju and not a retelling of the original story..................................................................
Nice story, please keep going. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
While the story has a good foundation as ot goes I notice the small details where it looks likr the author is trying to add a bit of video game logic to it
A história é promissora, a escrita está bem também. claro, eu espero que o Autor não a abandone como a maioria faz nesse site, infelizmente.
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some grammar mistakes and story little 🤏 fast but overall good naruto fan fiction (:̲̅:̲̅:̲̅[̲̅:♡:]̲̅:̲̅:̲̅:̲̅) ------------------------------------------------ 🎛⬜⬜ ⬜⬜⬜ ⬜🍎⬜ ⬜⬜⬜ ⬜⬜⬜ ______________________________
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I got clickbaited because of the title and synopsis. I thought he reincarnated as the Juubi or Tailed Beast or something because of the word Shinju but he got reincarnated as Naruto instead. Good work btw.