/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Senju Reborn
摘要
Just another reincarnation story in the Naruto(AU) world.
A young man who died after the celebration party of his high school graduation, he died for a small mistake of the being that took care of the universe he inhabited, and won the chance to be born in the naruto world as compensation.
This is my first story, I'm just doing this out of curiosity so don't charge me for anything I do.
tag: romance?, no harem, op mc? r-18?
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寫檢討
The quality of the writing is very simple. I assume the author is ESL, if so your english is at a decent level and I wish you the best developing it further through your writing. For native English readers, this will be a tough read, while the grammar is ok, the sentence structure and writing style are very raw.
is this going to be dropped please no.. because it have a great potential it's just writing quality and regular update is required....,........
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