/ Fantasy / NARUTO :REBORN AS KAKASHI
摘要
Vishnu a university Student who has photographic memory is reborn as kakashi in narutounivers with the ability to absorb any bloodline and memories.
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The MC is trying to change the plot too much and the MC has a god and hero complex, it's stupid, I guess that the writer will have a hard time continuing this novel, because of the character making and changes to continue the changes under by MC to the new plot,.......... There are a lot of similarities with fanfic about Kakashi on webnovel, heheh.
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Please any one of a have good plan to develop this chapter please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please Please please suggest me, and help me in grammar mistakes and if any one of you want to changes in particular chapter please suggest me And last but least don't forget to comment