/ Anime & Comics / Naruto; Plasma Release
摘要
After my death I got reincarnated in the world of Naruto.
But who knew living in a place where children are sent to war would be so hard.
Even with my future knowledge and perspective, I was just above average.
This time.. I got a second chance in the same world. This time I won't just be above average, this time I will be the first.
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First person POV
No harem, no system.
Also please don't sweat the details like age or order of events.
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will you finish the story or drop it just wondering dddd d dd d dd d dd d d d d dd d d d d d d d dd d d d dd d d d d d d d d d d dd d d d
Its really good pls dont drop it ghgfdebt8iuyhbtrgvfdcsxa itvfrdcsxaz< iubgfvdsxa rbegvfcdsx 'iuyrgtvfcedxsaz< *Äibgfvsxaz iuhtgrfvced 'äiutrtgrfedw
3 chapters so far and already better than 95% of all other naruto fictions out there, the story has a good starting point, no unneeded nerf done yet, currently in planning stage so far and with how development is so far will be really good with more chapters in id say no romance atm but he is still just a kid so there is time for that, if author is taking suggestions or giving teaser to his future partner or 2 would be amazing( Konan best waifu)
just because there is no system is enough for me Honestly......,..............................................................................
Nice start so far, was a bit disappointed by Mc being in Konoha (i mean , nothing wrong here but there is endless number of Konoha self insert and few of other village so i'm a bit tired of konoha, at least you choose same period as minato while the big majority are naruto/kakshi era so thx ). Also i don't know if it's just me but i though Mc would be kumo cuz plasma made me think about Darui's Ranton (water+wind+thunder, Mc got wind+thunder+fire). With that said 5/5 for the first 3 chapter, the 'cheat' are explained so thx for that